Great story

I hope you are going to start the next story for this series really soon. I just completed a binge reading of the whole series this weekend!

I'm so glad I found these after you've had them written. I think I would go crazy waiting for an update! Going to see what you wrote next. And I hate that Malfoy got to arrest her. Really?! Lol. Happy writing.

Bawled my eyes out huhuhu

i'm totally emotional with Steve's letters
warms my heart and also makes me want to cry
I'm looking forward to more

You write angst, turmoil, and destruction soooooo well

They should have sent Malfoy to Azkaban after the war. Technically, *he* didn’t defect and neither did his father. Only his mother did in lying to Voldemort and she wasn’t even a Death Eater to begin with...Draco Malfoy should I’m no way have any political or governmental power...he obviously hasn’t changed a bit! He obviously still thinks that muggles are subhuman and that witches and wizards are superior.

Okay...what? Hermione is powerful and she’s been trained by Thanos for crying out loud! They should not have been able to sedate and kidnap her. Again, following canon plot so closely does not make sense when such a powerful player is added to the equation...it just feels like a lack of originality, honestly.

It kind of bothers me that Wanda was able to see into Hermione’s mind at all, let alone manipulate it to give her visions...sorry, but Hermione is definitely more powerful than Wanda. Even with Occlumancy she would have been able to keep her out of her mind, but now that her magic is strengthened and she’s been further “enhanced” by Thanos? No way! I think maybe you’re trying to stay a little too close to canon plot, but it’s getting unrealistic because with Hermione’s power and skill on their side, the outcome *would* be different! Even if you’d included something about Hermione being able to subdue the Hulk faster and transport him away from the city, that would have made more sense. Just feels like you’ve made her weaker for the sake of continuing to follow canon. This isn’t meant to be a flame, just encouragement to branch out from canon. Hermione isn’t just a ripple in canon; she’s a tidal wave and things would have gone differently with her presence.

Loved this! Wow, Draco is crazy!

If Hermione doesn't use Arresto Momentum on the falling island and reduce the damage/casualties from what's reported in the movie, I'm going to be aggravated. I don't expect her to be able to completely stop something that big, but maybe slow it down slightly. Or, if in conjunction with a bunch of other magical people, slow it down significantly.

Yes, it's the funniest MCU movie to date.

I like the thought that went into that scene. I hadn't connected the potential help magic could be to Tony's desire to protect the world. It makes me think of the scene in _Avengers: Endgame_ when everyone comes through the sling ring portals, and now I wonder how the masters of the mystic arts will fit into this crossover setting.

Oh, shit! You're getting my hopes up. I really hope this internal reveal doesn't end up as an inconsequential side plot.

Given all the extra swearing you've had Steve do in these stories, I thought that surely you wouldn't include the "language" running gag. I guess I underestimated your dedication to the written equivalent of editing Hermione into the movie scenes rather than letting her presence change things. Your British vernacular sometimes slips through, also, like when "watch your language" became "mind your language". Even aside from that, the characters sometimes don't talk like themselves in what original content there is, particularly Tony (I appreciated "Holy Carrie!" in this chapter, but that's an exception to the trend), so maybe the literary photoshopping is because of a lack of confidence in writing their characters otherwise? Sorry to harp on this, but I keep seeing it happen.

Oh no, does Wanda now know about the wizarding world? Oh, wait, is she actually a witch in this crossover? Like, that's what the experiments did to her: Struger accidentally found the magic gene?

Wizards and witches can do magic without wands or any kind of tools; it's just harder. In some parts of the world they do everything with hand gestures. Her proficiency at wandless magic would only be notable insofar as she used a wand for most of her life since age 11.

Lol Frozen. I think you didn't need to spend an entire paragraph explaining the joke after Thor's line, though.