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Holy shit this got me invested hard.
VERY nice first chapter

i hope that you will continue this soon :)

hereby i declare that by law, this series must continue. but seriously i rly liiked this sad to know that you stopped uploading it :(

I like your premise in this story, but I have a couple of problems. Jayce is right to question the status quo and challenge the gods,but I'm also confused by some of his reasoning. First off, he a bit too self righteous, how are you going to be holier than thou when your own world is a hot mess due to people fighting?
Earlier he worried about people using his work for horrible ends, but now he's all gun ho to share his knowledge. I don't know much about the new lol lore, but you could argue that the summoners are sort of like the gods in this story; they sort of determine the fate of the world by hosting the league, a system that the world operates on.
If he is going to change the status quo, then he is going to need to do better than just giving out knowledge like candy. Humans are often violent and selfish creatures, knowledge is power, and the so called peace or unity of the god system will probably pop leaving a horrible mess. Revolution is always messy and sometimes it doesn't end well.

This is what league fanfics should aspire to be. I loved this despite the fact that I despise Jayce whenever I see him in the game.

Holy shit I just found this story and I gotta say it's fantastic it's really well made and it was so fun to read please continue this story I really would love to read it till the end

Ahh so Jayce is the "Prometheus" of Orario then. Giving human light, knowledge to stand by themselves, independent from the Gods. It's really good, I love it. But I'm sure the Gods don't like this idea at all, that will bring a lot of problems later. What's gonna happen next, I wonder? I'm excited looking forward to your future chaps. Please keep doing the great work!

You really gotta stop with the fucking dots... it's really fucking annoying... please... just stop...

Yes, I fucking love it! I haven't read this manga, or even have the slightest idea who Jayce is, but this single chapter made me so unbelievably happy, i can't even put it into words.
These fantasy worlds seem to have common trends, mainly everyone's passive acceptance of a sort of power heirarchy that cannot be debunked by anyone but the main character. Yet here is a man with no great power, no predetermined destiny, nothing but his intelligence and towering resolve to not only surpass the limits that others expect of him, but to also completely destroy the formula of subservience to higher beings that so many seem to adopt, leading them into a hopeful tommorow.
So many view humans as weak, at the absolute bottom of the food chain, existing only at the pleasure those stronger than him. It is this thinking that absolutely infuriates me, and I relish anything that seeks to debunk that philosophy. Please keep writing, you are part of a very small group i have found that seems to enjoy the idea of humanity breaking whatever fictional bonds keep them tied down, and seek to make a brighter future.
On a technical note, you're writing is solid with very few grammatical mistakes, but could use less ellipses...

I know my read about mythology and how you incorporate and potrayed it here in Danmachi's 2nd age of the gods is nothing but awesome, intriguing and interesting! I can't wait to see the next one so pls don't lose your drive! Thumbs up! Love it!

O: I love this story! In the words of Jayce when asked how everything he makes is possible, "Science bitch!"

Very interesting! You have my attention.
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Grammar wise tour story started out pretty good but once you get about half way through your grammar started getting exponentially worse almost like you were using spell checker at first and then decided to stop using it part way through. Perhaps English isn't your primary language though. Either way I recommend you find a competent beta reader. Otherwise good story so far

I need more of this. GIVE ME MORE PLEASE!