Plz write soon

Can someone please tell me what is better this or the rewrite?

Can you please mark as complete and put in the summary about the rewrite so people can go to the new story. Thank you.

I was not expecting Izuku to except One For All

welp I enjoy the first chapter, when it got to the second chapter it went in the cliche, I met a girl and now I'm love with her and gonna share all my fuckimg secrets, which is fucking dumb.

please update

Boron is pretty... unconductive especially because it isn’t a metal. Just stick to the left side of the periodic table next time

This whole premise about the quirkless people being discriminated against is nonsense. Some heroes have extremely niche abilities to the point that most of the time they’re essentially quirkless e.g Aizawa and Nighteye. But now that I think about it, you probably hadn’t seen that by this point

So why would Izuku tell Mei that he’s quirkless if he’s going to get OFA? That made 0 sense and I’m 100% sure that it’ll come back to bite him in the ass

Am I the only one that noticed the bit of hypocrisy from Aizawa?

There is something that has been annoying me since it happened the first time...

QUIRKS DOES NOT NEED THESE MARKS! ‘ ’

Quirks is a word, and when talking about someone’s quirk, it should be done like these!

His quirk allows him to blank

Midoriya does not have a quirk

Quirks has been around since bla bla bla

Even if you don’t have a quirk, you can be a hero

.

You see what I mean? Quirks do not need to be ‘’ because that isn’t how it is meant to be!

FIX IT! FIX IT NOW!

Honestly since it takes a long while for Izuku too get full control of One for All in the manga I figured you wouldn't need to worry about getting rid of the suit at all. I mean in the Ironman comics Tony's suit allows him incredible strength. I thought that was going to be the angle here in your story was that One for All would provide the Strength and Izuku's suit would provide the protection and anything else he needed. That there would be no reason at all for Izuku to get rid of his suit and just fake it that his suit provides his strength, you know because he is smart in this story. So I really don't understand the need for a rewrite but hey its your story, do whatever you want.

Don’t worry about it too much. You did an excellent job with th this story and I expect you’ll do just as well with the rewrite. Writer’s Block is a bitch that just comes out of nowhere sometimes and drop kicks your muse out the window. Not a whole lot you can do about it. :P At least you’re not doing what my stupid butt is and trying to write three different stories while a fourth rattles in the back of your head.

I'd love to see a fic without the slime monster scenes. If you're getting rid of OFA, I'd suggest leaving out that canon stuff up until the entrance exam.

So many fics plus the anime only prove one thing to me... Aizawa should've kicked Mineta's pervy butt out of the academy.