Woah.

This was incredibly, /incredibly/ well written. You have such a talent with words, twisting and turning them so that they do exactly what you want them to, invoke the emotions you wanted to invoke in your readers.

I think you've really achieved that, because I certainly felt a whirlwind of emotions throughout this. Usually, oneshots or drabble where you're changing someone so much, it feels forced since there's not much time for character development but it definitely did NOT feel like that here. My favourite scene had to be when Barty burst and asked her why she hadn't left. It showed another side of him, one we haven't seen before and I liked what i saw.

The last paragraph where she says he wasn't ready to hear her forgiveness, that was /beautiful/

Great work :")