I enjoyed this story very much, and I was happy to see it got finished which it deserved. I kind of hope there will be a sequel as I feel there is more to come. But it's fine this way! I couldn't see any SPAG errors, either.
Thanks a lot for the story!

If the May guy is giving you trouble, don't listen to him\her! I may ship Serena more, but I still love this story. Please continue. This site is where we can write what we want without fear of copyright as long as we acknowledge it.

Come on! I gotta know how it ends!

Well, now things are really getting heated

Fuck off. this site is for AshXMay stories only

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!

OMG! Sooooooooo sad! TToTT.

Johanna died and Dawn is Saliva's twin?! OMG what a plot twist! But oh that Cyrus has Saliva! Magot worm pie Cyrus! IMMA *is being dragged away by someone who gagged me* MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!

Woah plot twist right there. Twins huh did NOT see that coming.

For some reason, I knew this would happen.

Keep your dirty hands off the happy sisterly reunion, punks!

Wow. Did I NOT expect that twist of them being ACTUALLY related. Nice.

Dawn, tell him the truth in the name of love! Oofus! Sorry! I just love that song! Anyways I loved this chapter! It felt like I was in the book! See ya!

OMG! This was so cool. Hmm, looks like Salvia is in trouble! Uh oh!

This was really great! I hope that Cyrus's suspicion goes away fast! And as for the two love birds... I wonder what they are up to? Bye!
Love twilight sparkle and now I gotta take to the skies

Great. Drama.

Your fic is so good. It's actually inspired me to make a Pokemon "Princess and the Pauper" fanfiction with these two girls myself. It will have a slight "Barbie: TPatP" theme. I have other stuff to do, but I hope to start eventually . Keep up the good work.