My undying love for Hiccelsa has been reignited after watching Frozen 2 on Disney. I just love everything about them. They are both so socially awkward but Elsa is much better at hiding it. I adore assertive Elsa. What a queen! These two really do fit together.

My money is on the general. He seemed power hungry for him to be the spy.

back spines? on hiccup? ...

Damn you! Right in the feels! Please tell me you're working on more. This has been a refreshing different look at a mix for the FrozenXhttyd cross. I enjoy the slightly more realistic side of Hiccup you portray and a slightly less formal Elsa. She's very queenly but has had Anna rub off on her a bit.
I also like the action and plot orient instead of spending a bunch of time on the court afairs and politics. We all know this isnt really how the royal system would work and its refreshing to see a nicw mix of suspended disbelief and accurate flashes of royal occurrences.

Post the next chapter already.

IT IS GUSTAFF! HE IS THE MOLE I TELL YE!... and how does Hiccup know there was a first ice age?

Great story! Love it! Hope you update soon!

Great story. Love what you have done so far. can't wait for the next chapter.

Im impressed. It's probably been 6 months since I read something in this fandom that gave consistently good quality chapters with every new update.

It's a new take on a down and out hiccup, and I'm really enjoying it. Elsa being more forward was a good choice too. So many stories I see where they depict Elsa as being hopeless and shy, even after the great thaw. Drives me nuts, Elsa is a queen, not a bashful school nerd.

So good on that! I hope to see more. My guess is gustav. The military guy is possible, what with him trying to think what's best for the future of the kingdom, but the Dock master seemed a little too ambitious and friendly to me.

Anyway, cheers, and good luck! I'll be looking out for more.

Best,
A Simple Cup (of Joe)

Thanks for updating and great chapter!

I was waiting for "Desperation", but "Eyes of Pain" is okay.

Astrid:

Well, it looks like the buildings/cabins around Berk are greatly reduce. It also seems that Astrid has grow into quite the Shield Maiden or Warrior, but works closely to the Village. Gothi has made a prophecy which could mark the END of Berk and possible the Hairy Hooligan Tribe as whole. It seems pretty dark. I hope that the Hairy Hooligan Tribe survives, but the Berk is destroyed by Drago Bludvist dragons/army.

Hiccup:

Seems things changes and others are still cannon to Hiccup character. He was quite astounded by Trolls that he started to draw and make observations about the Trolls. It looks like Pabble the Troll Tribe elder, that Hiccup can't runaway from Dragon and his Dragon Army for long. It either fight or run away forever. It hard to deal with that being Tortured and also that his past is exposed to Strangers/Royalty with Magic. Still, it looks like Hiccup has found a POSSIBLE spy for Elsa/Arendelle on Queen Elsa council. It seems likely. Elsa was feared as a ICE Queen and transformed MOST the region into parts of a Artic Region, so yeah Elsa could have enemies that DON'T show hatred to her or fear her power would doom Arendelle.

Queen Elsa:

It looks like she just had a romantic flight with Hiccup. I don't know if Hiccup or Elsa are moving fast. We are not at the Epilogue. It took Two Movies and TV series with Hiccup and Astrid to get together. Still, Valka spying on her son and his acquaintances taken notice of Elsa looks that she cast at Hiccup. It could be possible. What we need to read is Queen Elsa demonstrating her powers: Freeze things, create ANOTHER Marshmallow or a Army of creatures like Marshmallow to fight. I don't know. I hope to read Hiccup get introduce to Elsa world and Arendelle as City.

Stoick:

He still sailing for gathering of Viking Chiefs to deal with Drago Bludvist, Alvin the Treacherous and the Dragon Army. Stoick is hard as stone, but inside he just looking for Hiccup and Valka to come back to him. Stoick right now is a man, who lost everything, can only do what he can for the Tribe. When the battle comes with Drago Bludvist or Alvin the Treacherous or the Dragons; Stoick the Vast will fight them. He lost so much, so he won't let down his Tribe.

Drago Bludvist:

It looks like he nervous about Hiccup now in contact with the Ice Queen and gave away Drago Bludvist element of surprise with his Dragon Army. No matter. It seems Drago Bludvist has not only a Bewilderbeast and Red Death class Titan Dragons, so Drago has the MOST power. I wonder if Alvin the Treacherous will be killed by who? Stoick, Drago or even Hiccup. Hell! Queen Elsa could kill Alvin. With Hiccup around, Drago knows that ANY spy he has in Arendelle will be caught. Drago Bludvist will CRUSH the Viking Chiefs, leaving the Tribes without Leaders and easy taken for Drago Bludvist army to take.

Questions

1) Should we expect Queen Elsa to use her Powers more or at least practice her abilities?

2) Are we going to have Hiccup observe Queen Elsa's advisors to figure out who the spy or will Hiccup do some detective work?

3) Will Valka and Stoick ever reunite with each other to at least known the other alive?

4) Will Berk be spared or will all the Vikings be destroyed by Drago Bludvist own Forces?

Suggestions

1) Yeah, that should be something. Maybe even turn Elsa practicing with her powers as a BONDING moment with Hiccup. Hiccup showed her a perspective of Dragons flying and a Sunset that you can never find on Land, but in the Sky itself. I want Queen Elsa to be more action packed and sort of show that he is a DIFFERENT Queen or perhaps even a Empress in the making. What the differences with Queen or Empress? Probably the attitude of a ruler, but I figure a Empress controls MORE Land or territory depending if Queen Elsa gains ALL of Drago Bludvist conquered spoils.

2) A bit of both. Observing them from the Council, but also Hiccup doing some detective work. Sort of show that even if Hiccup SUSPECTS one of Elsa's advisors, he can't just accuse them. Hiccup needs EVIDENCE! Gold, letters, Drago Bludvist men pointing out the spy or maybe even evidence of a advisor fearing/hating Queen Elsa. Something that damning evidence. Hiccup a stranger in Arendelle with a Dragon. Hiccup has no influences besides a friendship with the Royal family developing. Hiccup needs evidence in order to find the spy and take them out or even have the Spy send misinformation to use to their advantage to take down Drago Bludvist forces.

3) "How to Train a Dragon 2", well I love how Stoick and Valka love remained strong. Still, I would like if they BOTH lived. Sort of read the drama of that. Shouldn't Stoick be a bit angry at Valka for leaving him and Hiccup to take care of Dragons. Sure, Dragons and Humans can coexist. It does not make it easy. Maybe Valka pointing out to Viking Culture dealing with traitors by killing or exile. I love to read Stoick and Valka at least find some comfort with each other with some reason behind it.

4) It would be good to read Hiccup and Queen Elsa change the fate of Berk. Berk the ISLAND can be spared, BUT the other Viking territories will probably suffer. Probably at the end of Drago Bludvist conquest/defeat, Berk could be the Island of Viking Culture/Territory. Maybe even a haven for Dragon and Dragon Riders to start off. Of course, I figure that Arendelle will also be a haven for Dragons and Dragon Riders as well. It just I hope Vikings do live, but deal with the horror of Wars such as losing homes. Hiccup and Elsa could save Berk, but other Viking Islands would suffer. Just a idea. I do expect Berk to be a BATTLE GROUND in the future. Some damage done. Still, with how this chapter ended, it seems like Berk is doomed along with MAJORITY of the Hairy Hooligan Tribe members.

Keep up the good work and thanks for updating!

I can't wait for "Desperation" to be updated! It almost as exciting as watching "Game of Thrones" Season 7, BUT could you blame if I favor "Game of Thrones" over your story series such as "Obsession" and current work "Desperation".

this is getting good

AWESOME! i can't wait for more!

Have you checked out these stories? i highly recommend them if you haven't!

"The Dragon Master and the Snow Queen", by cgsmithmo, HiccupxElsa
"A Favor for a Friend", and "Trust Me", by Mags2015, both HiccupxMerida

Hmm... Some setup. I'm looking forward to the delivery.

Thanks for the update. Your story is pretty awesome.

Half of me thinks Elsa and Hiccup are moving too fast. It has only been 2 days. The other half of me recognizes that Frozen takes place in the 1840s. In this time period, they are technically moving too slow. Engagements used to be made before people ever met. Elsa will always be grave and poise especially next to Hiccup's social awkwardness. I just want you to show what great thinkers they BOTH are. Elsa is just as smart and capable as Hiccup with a similar aversion to social interaction. Don't make her a damsel even if she isn't a traditional warrior like Astrid.