I really love to read more fanfic of GoChi with ChiChi having this personality trait. It gives a nice and engaging look on how things get handle. For once Goku being confused on how to read her since she's not emotionally expressive.

Oh my god! This is the first AU I read in the DB fandom and I have to say I loved it soooo much. I’m wary of AU because they not always maintain the essence that I love about the show, but man, you did an amazing job here.
It is true that characters might be a little OCC at times, but the writing style, the plot, the details and everything else captivated me so much, at the end I just didn’t care. Besides, the OCCness wasn’t that bad and it made sense. As far as I’m concerned, Goku was still charismatic and a champ and Chi-Chi was your dignified lady. The best part is that this could easily pass as one slow burn romance for all the years it took this two to get together, all while still being a quick pace fanfic. Sublime!
So yeah, really loved this. Great job.

OMG! I so love your story...Glad i found this one. Thank you so much

this was AMAZING! the au, the format, just everything! Each little snippet and word in this was intentional, and my god, you know how to convey so much in so little and I appreciate that, gave more room for the tension, the emotion to settle and drown you, also, never had I ever read a dynamic between them like this, and it was refreshing! I was rooting for them so hard and ugh what a great one-shot. I'm so happy you wrote this, I feel so blessed! You're so damn talented.

this was a beautiful mess, I enjoyed it

You managed to irritate me at the beginning and then make me very happy in the end...

I am infatuated with this story! The writing and style are so good and unique. Please please please write a version in Goku’s point of view. I’d really love to know what was going through his head at some
points and also exactly when he realized the extend of his feelings for Chichi.

This was SO amazing!

Beautiful story.
Reading it was delightful.
Thank'you so much for your work!

TH

Love your AU fics,so emotional
looking forward to reading more

I really enjoyed reading this! I must say, it's a nice change to have the roles in reverse this time with Chichi being clueless to his feelings and hurting Goku as a result. Usually it's the other way around. Lols! To be fair with Goku, even as a reader, I was starting to get frustrated at Chichi's mixed signals so I can only imagine how it was for him. But your characterization of Chichi was so vivid that I can also understand her reasons for acting how she did. I really enjoyed your modern AU take of this couple. Great Job'

I really loved this story. I read it yesterday, but I have been thinking about it since then. So, I decided it MUST deserve a review. Please write more GoChi! There are rarely people who write as well as you writing fanfiction in general.

Even though I could not understand Chi-Chi sometimes, much like Goku, you still convinced me of her character. Despite the fact is was OC as far as canon Chi-Chi, she was completely in character for what you were going for, and I loved it!

I love how everything seemed so planned out like you mapped the story and everything went exactly as you wanted it to. I could really tell you put some thought and effort into this, and that is what made me enjoy it all the more. This story really deserves more than 7 reviews, so I hope other people come and check out your story and leave the reviews it deserves.

This was a great written goku and chichi fanfic XD

Twas worst laid plan for miss mau, but the best ending

Push and pull game is very strong here and I LOOOOVE IT! Love those separate moments they finally confess out loud that they love each other. Awesome story! 2 thumbs up!