I think I have a problem, because I love fic that make me cry.
I find it incredible how they move the person's head and play with feelings, transmitting emotions through words and-

OK I stop.

Anyway, another chapter.
I am suffering only from the delay and short chapters. I think I read too fast. I understand the reasons for the delay, but this is distressing me K

And .. REGGY!
THIS BEAUTIFUL AND WONDERFUL HUMAN BEING.
Thanks for making him appear.
(sometimes I think Sirius should appear less and Reggy more)

I love bittersweet things (I identify a lot with Sayori rs)
So, probably, this ending will satisfy me a lot.

I hope you find an internship.
Thanks for existing.
Jabiroca approves this fic.

Beijin, beijin and good afternoon

Dear Author,
Oh my gods... this was hilarious. Well... Percy spoke too soon & what the hell are the fairies doing in the quidditch field?
I just love this book so much that I already reread it 4 times. Your writing is so goddam amazhang. I would totally vote for you to be the goddess of PJO HP crossovers.
Being frank, it would be horrible when the wholesome trio break up and Percy would be obviously caught up in the crossfire.
I would also love to read the reaction of the Marauders when they realize Rhea is Percy's grandmom. I am sure it will be divine. Waiting for your next update.
Your Sincere Reader,
Theertha

I FINALLY FOUND TIME TO READ THIS! This has been sitting in my phone, whispering me ‘read it! Read it!’ and I cried in despair because mY ASSIGNMENTS FOR SCHOOL. I died. BUT! Now is Sunday and I finished them all so the first thing I did when I woke up was read this.

I honestly don’t know how you manage to write almost 3k just on a Quidditch match, and I admire you for that because I could never. This is a gift.

Percy being the seeker is. My life? My baby is a talented player and Zeus will not knock him out of the sky! I love that he gave a friendly-not-friendly-but-useful advice to Regulus. FriENdShIp.

Toot and Minnie doing commentary on the match? I live for this. I need more Toot in my life. Also the faIRIES. I know no one thought it was weird, but I know it was! It has to be! THIS IS IMPORTANT I CAN FEEL IT! The plot thickens! *insert maniac laughter*

S! Can I have one? Can I? He is a fAiRY-saVeR!

You are the author, so I guess everything you say is canon in your story automatically becomes canon. Though I t’s nice to know you found a reason to shamelessly bend the rules of canon-canon (does that make sense?)

How could I not? Dislike him and like him? For starters, he is a character that can actually be found in real life. That on itself makes it much more appealing because it’s somewhat relatable. And hIS peRsONaLitY. I’m not gonna repeat it because I already said it last time but. Ahcdlej. Those are my feelings for Damien xd. But you are right! No one and nothing can compare to Percy’s snark and natural sassynes!

The think with the Marauders, is that I know they are good at heart. Like, for a fact I know. I guess that makes me more lenient I giving them some general slack and just hope they grow up fast so they have their reality check and become decent members of society.

Glad my frustration amuses you? It’s okay not to have Marauders, you’ll put some next chapter and instead you GAVE ME ONE FULL OF REGULUS. JUST. U.

If that didn’t make it clear, I LOVED IT! So much Regulus! I can die a happy woman! And the end OMG! Regulusssss! I already said it but you deserve double recognition. You are a fairy-saver and I’ll love you forever. Not only for the fairy-saver part, but whatever.

I like that Percy wasn’t the hero. Because he’s always being selfless and letting go things he wants, so it’s refreshing for a change to see him like ‘I want this, and for one time in my dam (pun intended) life Imma get it, you hear me?’. It shows that he is human, despite his godly blood, and that he too, acts like one despite having said blood’s influence in his very being, which express in his fatal flaw and general selflessness.

Though I know that came from Sally, because it sure didn’t come from any god.

Now I’m sCarED. But also excited? I’ll be waiting for Damien to have a change of heart. Maybe join the gang?! No wait, I think that’s too much. Whatever I’ll see it when it happens.

That’s all for now. Stay safe! Kudos!

I've always loved Percy angst. And I love how you've portrayed Damien. Manipulative but charming at the same time. Im pretty sure that Regules and Percy could be good friends even if Percy isn't on Regules good graces at the moment.
And your right, Percy can't bee the the hero in every cicumstance . He isnt perfect.

Ps. Best wishes, I'm sure you'll graduate with flying colours.'-)

Dam I loved it! I love your portrayal of Regulus by the way, and Damien too but what I'm wondering with my whole head is what the heck is causing all these creatures, even fairies to be acting like they are. Oh and I'm a bit interested in how Percy's own mechanical fairy friend would interact with the other fairies haha.

And I love JerryWhat are we? Chopped liver?" haha that line is always one of my favorites gets me laughing all the time.

Anywho the writing itself was awesome I was actually bumping my knee up and down in anxiety from "watching" the Quidditch game.

Keep it up!

Duck Percy!

WOW! Poor Percy, man. I mean, at least, he didn't fall off of his broom, right? But he got knocked unconcious. Just great. *shakes head disappointedly Percy* WELL ANYWAY, GREAT JOB ON ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER! Keep writing and I hope you find an internship. GOOD LUCK!

Soooo, idk if I'm late or early whatever I'm going to start with my awesome and freaking long review with this chapter that I read greedily because fuck yeah. First, I was really excited with this chapter because honestly I like when they play quidditch, and this one was really awesome. the parts that I enjoyed were of Toots and McGonagall, now those comments were lit. And Toots KNOWS there is tension between those captains lol! I wasn't expecting that comment but it made me laugh. Also, I didn't know I needed Percy and Regulus interaction in the game, soooo cute (when he called him Reggy I had a cuteness overload) ... You've just given me another kid to worry about, thanks!

I love competition, it doesn't matter which kind though, if it's about sports or another kind of thing, I do appreciate it even though I don't know a lot about sports lol, that's why I enjoyed this chapter, the competition, the adrenaline, the "I want to win so badly" is refreshing to see. I loved to just sit and imagined every scene that happen in this, I'm speechless with this chapter and I don't care that is technically short. It's amazing, how you wrote it is amazing. Also, smart plan Damien but my favorite team is gonna crush you hell yeah. I feel like I'll be a really loud enthusiastic fan if I was there lol. Now gushing to Marlene she is soooo Hardcore that wow, I love her soooo freaking much hahahaha, one of the best characters lol. She is really amazing and when she like, explodes in the game it makes me smile.

Now, with that fairies, it has something to do with what is happening? Like, idk, the other creatures running and it just happens that they come across the Quidditch game? Shit is going down and I want to know lol. Also, poor fairies that were catch by Regulus and Percy. And nice saving Reggy, (I'm assuming it was Reggy who saved that fairy) so proud now. Also, I was wondering when something injury-bad would happen...until that blackout lol.

One day, you know, I'll wrap my precious boys and wrapped then in a burrito blanket as you said. Hell yeah. Honestly I shouldn't have had my hopes up, he is going to be miserable, I know, I fear it, but hopefully he'll try to remember the good memories that'll help him in times of need I guess...so emotional I'm. Damn, I don't know, we'll have to see, that class seems the more interesting alongside Arithmancy and Care of Magical Creatures. I kinda dig math and animals lol.

Nice, I can't wait to see those little shits doing whatever they're cooking. Hahahahahahaha, well yeah, I do think it is how you put it. Damien has his own charm and knows how to use it, so yeah, I'm not that mad. Lol, I don't know what to think about that someone that embodies the Duffer nickname. Well thank you, I'm going to not be that harsh with my negative feelings, but so far nothing wrong has happened lol. I wanna see wholesome heck yeah...I just love them, they're precious kids.

I like to watch horror, fantastic magical kind of things, I guess. I don't really like romance and other kind. I guess things out of the ordinary trap me, however I am not that picky. I've been trying to watch LotR and the Hobbit tho, those are the ones that I'm really interested but is kinda weird because I don't really know how the order go. Recently I watched Pride and Prejudice, (that one and one with zombies) and Incident in Ghostland. Really enjoyed the zombies one, I like zombies actually, if you know a zombie movie tell me, I'll try to watch it. And you? what kind of movies do you like?

Sama-sama, anda akan melihat bahwa semuanya akan baik-baik saja. Kami hanya haría mempercayai kami dan menemukan peluang. I really send my well wishes, everything looks like shit but hopefully at the end we'll be well. And I'm glad to read that you and your family are doing well. Adoro todos los capítulos, no te preocupes, me encantan, son geniales. Y no importa, me encanta dejar cumplidos y opiniones, de esa forma nos enriquecemosQue te vaya bien, ¡Nos vemos! ¡Hasta la próxima!

Aaaaah, yessss even better than I expected, I love it.
I was thinking, you write as good as any author (that's how you call someone who writes books in English right?) Have you ever thought about writing a complete book of your own?

And this chapter was so good someone got knocked out from it.
Hehe, get it?

I'm with ya buddy. your writing skills can get you to write a book

You are correct, Percy really can’t TAKE A BREAK. *laughs* *sighs* That is a good one...

Poor Percy can’t survive one game without craziness. Like fairies?! Who would have thought? And then he ends up being bashed in the face because he DEFINITELY doesn’t have Tyche(think I spelled that relatively correctly) on his side.
Btw great great chapter; I loved the way you wrote the commenting and reggy:)
AND TAKE THAT DAMIAN! you LOST!
...
Oh yeah!
I haven’t seen 21 chump street but I’ll definitely have to try it! Thanks for the recommendation!
Have a great day!

It's good but you made a mistake in the score 20:30 and then you write 20:20 which should be 30:30 you should at least FIX.

Great chapter, a short but enjoyable (you write very well the quidditch matches and make me feel the tension ;D) though I have to question just how hard was the last hit to make Percy pass out...I mean we've seen him resist very powerful things before so yeah I have to question that.

Now I'll write some topics that I've been thinking about while reading the story.

The trio's future drama: To be honest I have to wonder what changes will take place when it happens but for me it's clear that it shouldn't happen the same thing as in canon. First of all I would argue that after going through all this new development in your story (the ghost of halloween accident, going against a basilisk and all the adventure to find the sword of Gryffindor etc...) and more that will happen they shouldn't "break up" easily to say the least. There's the fact that Percy had the experience with Luke and learned how he can't renounce to important people even if it's tempting, and well Lily's desition to break her friendship with Snape while understandable was weird for me...I mean she did realize that this meant that Snape would join the Death Eaters for good and that both of them could potentially end up in a fight to the death in the future right?

Then Marauders: This is all my personal opinion of course but while I do know that in the future they change for the better (well except por Peter who is complete trash and Sirius a little bit but I'll talk about him later) but still all those comments about them being charming...I just don't get it. They're not complete rotten eggs but they're bullies nonetheless (hell Sirius almost killed Snape by sending him against Lupin in his werewolf form and didn't seem to regret it even without thinking how that would make Remus feel...to be honest I hope that he gets a beating from Percy afterwards if the teachers are useless as they seem to be at times), being in the receiving end of bullying can really destroy the life of the victim and can't be tolerated no matter how endearing the bully can be. While we can't excuse Snape's actions as bit being the one at fault I would argue that what the Marauders did to him was a big influence for his bad desitions as well.

Love: I'm glad that you don't plan in making Percy leave Annabeth at all but having said that I'm curious about how things will turn out in this department, after all Percy is considered as being VERY attractive (he was even compared to a god in terms of looks!) so if James already felt annoyed about the relationship between Lily and Snape I can only imagine how he will feel with the one between his future wife and our favorite demigod who is pretty popular as well and a better quidditch player...considered a legend echen :3.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter, thanks for your hard work! :D

ahahah totally didnt prematurely post a review,,,,whaaaaaat? me? Never heh
hot knife through butter? but iS IT A CAKE? ARE YOU SURE ITS A BROOM
minnie mc-G admitting a steal to be crisp is better than christmas for the winning team I'm SURE
Marlene said "bet. bET."
regulus yesssss
slYTHERIN NOOOOO
#percyrespectswomen
"quivering bunny to fierce lion",,,,,,,Toots writes fanfiction you absolutely cannot convince me otherwise and hed be the one writing a 'sold to 1d #10th anniversary yaassss' wattpad fic oh-
sometimes I just remember how competitive these students are about quiddich and? do they have to maintain an A in their classes to play? who am I kidding its magic school theres no trigonometry hahahahahahhaaha(canigotomagicschoolwithnotrigpls)
slytherin said "quiddich? no. ping pong."
percy like "why's he sabotaging when hes good?" has the exact same energy as me writing an essay for history and finding out hitler wanted to send all the Jewish people to Madagascar and when that didnt work (for obvious reasons) his next best plan was genocide? same energy but vastly different vibe irookie"!
oh so its baseball but magic version now? I'm on board
"I just have to run faster than you" percy now upgraded to "get pwned I have the laser focus of squidward polishing his clarinet. I fought a god and won you just tryis this even allowed?" Toots out here asking the real questions tbh
mickieG supporting percy is the energy I NEED
I get so into the buildup and tension and then there'll be a line like "please dont attempt to catch the snitch or you Will be demolished by some 7th graders" and I remember why I love your writing
it's not like it hasn't happened before? i-? I would like to hear more?
uhuhuhuHUHHHHHH WH A T WHY ARE THER THERE ARE FAIREIES ON THE FIELD NOW THEY DID NOT PREP THEK FOR THIS DURING THE PRACTICES
does this have to do with the grindylows and the thestrals?
oh so it's a SWARM
PARDO so this is where the murder Hornets went
the forgotten plague
percy and regulus bonding over wacked out captains is giving me life they really said "ah swarm of fairies that caught even mickieG by surprise? a ruse most certainly sNITCH TIME
and they said 2020 couldnt get any weirder
waitwait? so did someone pull the fairy out of the way of the budger or did percy?
awww regulus sad hours nooyesss you celebrate with that team bro!
WAIT WHA T YOU CANT DO THAT EXCUSE ME SIR IM GONNA NEED TO CALL YOU ON THAT ENDING REAL QUICK THERE WAS NO NEED TO PUT THAT CLIFFHANGER THERE I MUST UTILIZE CAPS ON PRINCIPLE

short chapter or not this was really fun to read! I say this every time but I absolutely love Percy's sass and characterization
I'm hoping damien comes back for a little more, hes not the coolest kid on the block (by that I mean having empathy but yknow, baby steps) but I just,,have to appreciate his appreciation and absolute disinterest in a fair game
speaking of damien I love that you've included other characters and given them personalities that extend beyond the marauders and lily!
also as much as I proclaim myself to not be the biggest severus fan, I appreciate him in your writing so much! I love the way he's not evil and slimy right from the get go, that's quite refreshing!
is rhea there because of the grindylows and thestrals and fairies? are all three of those connected? what do they have to do with the prophecy? what did legolas mean? ahhhh

congratulations on almost being done with college, and goodluck with the internship search! I hope you're able to find one you enjoy and that you graduate smoothly! Please remember water and to breathe! (v cliche but I cant lie sometimes I'll be having a stress breakdown and I'll chug a glass of water and just breathe for a couple minutes and my motivation and mood go through the roof)
This chapter (and the one before it ahaha) were super fun to read, thank you!

Yeah idk man who wouldnt wanna Date that broom what else would he have said? mystery to me, you're going wild professor