| Reviews for The Fortress of Denliath |
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Rin chapter 10 . 7/7 One of the best (if not the best) FMA fanfiction I have ever read. There is action, passion and suspense, everything one could hope for. Please keep writing ! |
Gomboc123 chapter 10 . 4/1/2019 This is such an exciting and interesting start to a story! You have a lot of great world building in this au, and I cant wai to see what happens next! |
Mary-san 310405 chapter 1 . 7/16/2018 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. Esta historia es uno de los mejores AU. Qué e leído en mi vida. Porque no actualizas (incerte llanto descontrolado) . Imagínate que yo la adore y nisiquiera hablo inglés. Saludos desde México prrs. XD |
ssadropout chapter 10 . 6/28/2018 "I like your chances, Captain." I like that line! I can't wait to read about the quest for the other two parts of the seal. Will the seal have something to do with how Roy proves who he is? Like Excalibur? (Rhetorical question!) I think that a relative of the King of Creta will be a good match for the King of Drachma. I always love your AUs. You are so creative with the "gifts" in this one, and you perfectly fit the FMA characters into this tale. |
Tasia chapter 10 . 5/9/2018 I LOVE THIS! You write so well and this type of AU is my weakness. I don't know why I haven't read this until now. I do hope you continue soon because I can't wait! |
neitherawakenorasleep chapter 10 . 4/30/2018 I'm sorry. I owe you loooots of reviews. And long overdue ones. I first read The Trickster and the Lionheart and The Guilded Phoenix. I extremely and tremendously enjoyed both, without knowing then that both works are of the same author. My poor excuse on why I didn't review then is because I thought you were an inactive author. Then when I was craving to re-read The Trickster again (for a lack of Riza-centric materials to read), that's when I started looking through your profile and discovering your other stories and the fact that you are actually still an active author here. My deepest apologies. I will take some time to review your other works. I know the long-winded blabber above is technically not a review for The Fortress, but needless to say that you got me hooked once again. You always bring out and focus on the best of Hawkeye, which is so understated in the manga and most FFs here. Thank youuuu for sharing and looking forward to read more. |
Xennariel chapter 9 . 2/11/2018 Ahhhh this chapter was outstanding, as always! I'm so enthralled by this story and I eagerly await the next chapter! |
ItzelMtzing chapter 9 . 2/11/2018 This is amazing, keep writing its great! |
VampirateLycan chapter 8 . 2/9/2018 Well, considering its 02:42 I think I love it. Lol fantastic work as normal. I await the rest impatiently :) |
Shijaeger chapter 8 . 1/15/2018 Your writing is ...astonishing! Man...MAN OH MAN WHAT A BATTLE ! Riza is badass asdfghjk OMG I LOVE HER AAGGHH AND ROY IS SO SCARY SOMETIMES ... I LOOOVE HIM! I dont have words...( always crying over this story because is so fantastic ) |
paladin17 chapter 8 . 1/15/2018 Glad to have you back! As usual, good stuff. Waiting for the next chapter. |
Shijaeger chapter 7 . 1/12/2018 OMG,What's going on? Wtf happened to her father? AND NOW SHE HAS THE ROSE? WILL ROY SEE IT? AAGGHHJAGHG I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER ! UPDATE ASAP |
Shijaeger chapter 6 . 1/12/2018 ASDFG so he doesn't know about her power? AND NOW HE CAN MAKE FIRE? DAMN... And so many mysteries... but goddamn I love their relationship I LOVE IT SO MUCH and if something happens to them...asdfg (ugly crying) .And I love Riza's relationship with Gracia,the best cousins ever! |
Shijaeger chapter 5 . 1/12/2018 Damn,I hate Roy's mother so much AAGGHH |
Shijaeger chapter 4 . 1/11/2018 I cannot say how gorgeously written this story is.I LOVE IT SO MUCH! AND THEY KNEW EACH OTHER? WOAH HASGFGJHJHHGF ...and poor Grumman,his wife is unbearable,omg... |