What a great story, especially for your first time out. I enjoyed it so much that I lost track of time and finished it at almost 4:00 a.m. this morning. I’ll be looking forward to more from you. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Thank you for That! Was really good and I enjoyed it. Loved the Elinor situation and I'm glad you didn't have her die!

Brilliant story, I hope you continue with it

This is the first Holby City fic that I've read and I liked it a lot! :)

I'm loving this story, please update again soon! :)

i dont mind the slow burn as long as bernie and serena get together at the end and be happy together because they are made for each and are perfect for each other

Awwww... cute

I really like your stories and I'm loving the slow burn of this one. Look forward to the angst fest!

Thank you for the update! Lovely story.

This is a very well written story and this chapter didn't disappoint. Don't apologise for the slow burn. I like it. It's great that you're taking time to develop the characters and your story well. When chapter 6 arrives. It will be a lovely surprise.

Good reading wouldn't have thought she would be frightens of Marcus though

Wow ...what a beautifully written chapter, do hope you keep with your wonderful story, thank you x

Enjoying this this lovely light hearted story. Good luck with exams and looking forward to the next chapter.

This is great! Looking forward to new chapters!

Great story- please keep going.