This story has an awesome premise which I would really like to explore but the abrupt scene changes and erratic writing style is just too disorienting for me to enjoy reading. Even so, it's a great idea so thanks for sharing your imagination.

When’s Neo coming back I miss her

opening scene was lit af

I...am...Spiderman

*Snaps

you know. its always when the op heros leave that shit hits the fan

Only a couple days late, but I must say. HOLY SHIT. Excuse me for my language but this chapter is very much so deserving of said language. Like I’ve been reading fics for about five years now and damn. I can’t remember the last time a chapter hit THIS hard. It must’ve been years since I’ve read such a hard hitting chapter. For further perspective I was trying to read my favorite fic going on right now later in the day. I couldn’t sit through it. The chapter they uploaded was just so meaningless in comparison. Like it wasn’t bad either. It was mainly just set up, but still very high quality. I couldn’t really sit there and read it, because my mind would keep drifting back to this story and it’s conclusion.

I’m really looking forward to the next chapter in this over two year long journey. As for what exactly happens in the next chapter of this tale, I have some speculations as to what might happen. Quite honestly I didn’t expect these events to unfold the ways they did. Which makes me wonder if you have anymore twists up your sleeves. I would also like to congratulate you on being the only X-Over out of the nearly 70 on this section alone to get to this point from the beginning (to my knowledge). Very impressive indeed. That’s all I have to say. Have a nice day my dood.

Well, like to say this was fun...but I was really kind of put off by what you pull and barely changed the plot. Also in the next volume, could you please get rid of the stupid Adam obsession with Blake? Kind of ruined, if not destroyed, his credibility and character. Also Madame Web was...lame as usual, in really not doing anything but sending other people to do the job. It had fun beginning and middle, but the end just kind of went down. So I will say this was mostly a good story, however the unwillingness to change the end into something else was literally the most disappointing thing you could have done. So with that in mind, Don't expect to see me review or fav for the sequel. Cause RWBY Canon Volumes 4-6 killed it for me. So bye.

And so, it ends...

But we’re going to see a sequel. I can’t wait to see what you make of volume 4-6.

And (if I can make a suggestion or assumption) since you’re more than likely to put in Ben Reilly and Kaine, will you be adding more of the Spider Society? Maybe branch out on that aspect, unless you’d rather keep it more tame and focused on the RWBYverse more specifically.

not to sound like im bitching. but please drop the "Adam stalker likes Blake" its what destroyed his character in the show and basically what the writers forced onto him. he was supposed to be a mentor to Blake. nothing more nothing less. not to mention the noticeable age difference and all but that's just me.

but hey. do what you like man. im not gonna stop reading this.

Deadpool has not said “fuck” the entire story? Damn...

Well, this is pretty great filler for a volume that is (pretty accurately, now that you mention it) 3/4ths filler before they pull a GoT on us

The climax is nearly here. The fate of Yang and Peter’s relationship is at stake. Oh, and also Beacon’s fate.

P.S. Here’s an idea: Peni Parker and Ruby Rose. The idea already gives me cavities because of how sweet it is.

Has Deadpool really not said 'fuck' in this entire story?

I mean stays

Hopefully Peter stats in Remnant since team RWBY seems sad to let him go.

AWSOME

hopefully you give him his spider sense back at some point because that honestly is the only thing that prevents Kaine's eventual rise but more importantly in some universes the cause of his death plus with kaine not having it for a while he's learned to compensate for it luckily so if he ever gets it back he has basically two inhuman reflexes that most never get