| Reviews for Lust of the Flesh |
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   Neli2003 chapter 4 . 4/2 Please update! |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 4 . 9/19/2019 This is kinda wild as hell but in a very good way ! If you ever update this again I will be here to read it |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 3 . 9/19/2019 I think the story so far is really cool but there’s some problems with grammar and spelling. I can still understand what’s going on though so it’s not a super big deal |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 2 . 9/19/2019 Spooky! Also the concept of someone putting up a fake mission for like shady ass shit and lying about the reward money is really cool. I think I’ve seen it in the show, but it makes me wonder like why don’t guile’s double check to see if it’s legit and not just like a scam? I get that it’s hard to trap wizards, but anyone being can be attacked or taken advantage of off guard |
| sugarplum2498 chapter 1 . 9/19/2019 That last analogy of the fire in his heart is so cute :’) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/18/2019 update please |
| DanUchihaCullen chapter 4 . 11/19/2018 Interesting story, I am curious to see it continue. Really wanna know what happened to Lucy; is she being controlled? I hope you update again. |
| shadow31802 chapter 4 . 2/5/2018 this is so good |
| ThayetJade chapter 4 . 6/4/2017 Wow! I like it! Can't wait to read more! |
| Desna chapter 5 . 5/8/2017 It's tough bringing a plot together, once you have scenes built in your mind getting to them, putting them together in a cohesive way that flows for good reading takes some effort. You've got some great suspense built up, run with it. right now the story is wide open, could go any which way. Lucy could even turn it around and save Natsu and in doing, spur him to confess. Nothing sexier than a strong man willing to go to his knees for a woman. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2017 Fluffy and romantic ending with smut |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2017 Please continue this |
| TheBlackInferno chapter 5 . 5/7/2017 Natsu fights with draven. Natsu struggles, comes out victorious (of course), but falls unconscious. Guild mates come to the rescue only to find natsu unconscious. Natsu wakes up in the guild, confesses to lucy, and the guild parties for the return of the 2 fairies. Natsu and lucy leave party and natsu mates with lucy. The End. |
| turtle3334 chapter 5 . 4/24/2017 Uhmmm... thats a good question. I guess a happy ending but with some sort of lead on(kinda like a cliffhanger but not really). I'm not sure I often like to be surprised by the author on how they end their stories! Happy Writing! |
| turtle3334 chapter 4 . 4/23/2017 I like this keep it up! Happy writing! |
