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JadaLiburd chapter 31 . 7/3 Lord. Someone (Author) bless these poor young adults and help them through this. Btw, I have already fallen in love with your writing and this story! Can't wait for another amazing chapter! |
blackbloodywolf chapter 31 . 11/1/2019 this is so good I can't wait for more~ |
Vongola10 chapter 31 . 6/26/2019 Please continue with your story I love it so much. |
Happy-Momma-Of-Toby chapter 31 . 3/25/2019 Wish there was more |
Dan chapter 31 . 3/1/2019 Am glad ecerthing ok now, thank you updating and I hope everything keeps on going well. |
sarge1130 chapter 31 . 10/15/2018 This is such an amazing chapter and I love every scene in it. So nice that Law's training is doing well and even though I am so anxious for the coming war, I am still excited about how well he will fight in that war. Will he use a long sword or nodachi just like in OP? I love the omega bonding time between Luffy and Sanji. I don't know if they are allowed to fight but at least Sanji had find something where he is good at. I don't know if Ace is just stressful or he is just feeling jealous over Law. Marco cares for Law as a friend while Luffy is Law's mate - two persons whom he cares and was quite possessive of was somehow on Law's side. I have nothing to say much on this chapter other than it is as amazing as the previous chapters. I just hope you two authors are all doing well and are in the best of health. Thanks so much for the update :D. |
yukino76 chapter 31 . 9/28/2018 Good update thanks |
Tynnalti chapter 31 . 9/28/2018 Welcome back! God I’ve missed the story. Frequently visit it time to time and a new chapter just made me happy to read it late at night. Love Luffys and Sanjis side parts, them being the rascals of the castle is hilarious and I want more of it. Ace conflicted is in a way the Ace described in the series - but hopefully realizes what he needs solving on his own. (Tho I wouldn’t mind seeing him get help from another) Love the story, love the authors and be safe |
SinOfTheFox chapter 31 . 9/28/2018 This is a great story and I really hope you finish it. But don't feel rushed. If life's difficult at the moment, take you time. Theirs no rush, just don't forget about us. And good luck with your new job and such! |
LunarReads chapter 2 . 9/7/2018 Never mind |
LunarReads chapter 2 . 9/7/2018 What do you mean they were killed when he was seven they were alive when he was 15 in the first chapter |
sarge1130 chapter 30 . 5/5/2018 Love this chapter :). Absolutely love the omega bonding time. I agree with Sanji that Luffy is different from other omegas until I remembered that Luffy is Luffy. What I mean is that although Luffy is an omega, Luffy had still this strong personality that aren't affected by omega's obedience to alpha. However, quite sad that Luffy questioned himself if he really loves Law. I realized then that he had been calling Law as his mate which means that they are only fated to be together with no love involve. Well, I think Luffy haven't realized it yet but I think he already love Law. Although, Sanji had suffered abuse from other alphas, it was quite nice how he had reacted after learning Luffy's story. It just shows his empathy and I think this is his first time to show resentment on that action. Thanks for the update :D. |
Dan0002 chapter 30 . 4/23/2018 Finally a good fanfic that seems to be updating a good pace. Keep it up. |
yukino76 chapter 30 . 4/19/2018 good |
Samanta garcia chapter 29 . 3/25/2018 I have a question, when Law left the room, did he take Luffy with him? Law still loves Luffy? Law is still Luffy's partner? Tks I have not had time to read the fanfiction, so I wait for you to respond my doubts, if possible by Instagram or here my name on Instagram is: samantagarcia180. I await answers. Greetings from Spain |