| Reviews for A Fleet of Cracked Ships |
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seakard chapter 1 . 4/3/2019 Barely started this story, I'm grumbling to myself. I had a situation quite similar to Judy's experience (reversed, of course) where I went with several of my friends on a bachelor party. Well, he had told them point blank "NO STRIPPERS!" They agreed. Me, honestly, I've Never enjoyed strip clubs as if I wanna look and Not Touch, I'll save my money and buy a porno DVD. And my "friend," being a hypocrite, DOVE IN. Now, I couldn't exactly Leave as I Was the designated driver, but, when I saw where we were, I walked back outta the club and stayed by the car. 2 Good excuses. 1: they had a Mandatory alcoholic Drink minimum, and 2: No Smoking! Very Enjoyable tale, I'm just surprised that Judy (with all her movie morals and values) DIDN'T walk out. But, hey, it's yer story, and I'm just a Grumpy old Man. I can Almost imagine Nick's part of the tale, and ending with Jack being a LIAR about being Sterile! Think Judy would track him down, and make SURE he wouldn't Have To lie again! |
DrummerMax64 chapter 1 . 4/13/2017 Oh boy, this is going to be one heck of an interesting series! This is already a great start and is hinting at some awesome and steamy things to come in future chapters. I'm excited to see what other kinds of crack ships people will be writing, as there's a whole lot of different possibilities out there in the fandom. XD In regards to this chapter, good work! The lead-up was well done, and the lewd scene itself was both tasteful and risqué. I also liked the fact that you included WildeHopps and WildeSavage, seems like our main duo were both infatuated by that sexy rabbit. XD And having him as a prostitute whose stage identity is a secret agent? Brilliant! Looking forward to more in this series! |
DaJoyousGamr26 chapter 1 . 4/12/2017 Ok I did not expect that ending haha it's cool that your doing this but I do have a question you said Wildesavage is off limits is that because chapter 2 will include them or did you just end this chapter on that note for the sake of just ending it like that |