Reviews for Lab Rats Elite Force: Oliver, Kaz, Chase Roman and Riker |
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![]() ![]() Can you please bring back some of the stories you deleted? Jack’s Day at the Dojo, Non Stop Summer, and that Lab Rats one are so good! |
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![]() ![]() Update this story plz I love it |
![]() ![]() please, continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should definitely do the Thundermans |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that you brought in Experion. He and Megahertz were the only villains I actually liked on Mighty Med. Everyone else you could tell was written as a you will only be here once character. Even Annihilator and the evil hero's. Plus Megahertz gave off a misunderstood/evil to good villain. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, will the stories you took down ever be put up again? How about on a different platform? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying the main story, and the Kaz/Oliver chapters seem like they'll be cute intermissions between the sex. Although, later in the story, when you have more established couples, it'd be great to see similar, more romance-focused chapters for them. For the Thundermans, I've never really been an incest fan, so I'd prefer just Max joining the Elite Force universe (or, in a Thunderman story, Max being paired with Oyster, Link, Henry Danger, or Scott Tomlinson (JT Neal) from the Haunted Hathaways. Actually, since the Thundermans are in the same universe as the Haunted Hathaways, you could have him flirt with Chad, the one-off character from the cross-over episode The Haunted Thundermans, who was also played by Chase Austin. :)). |
![]() ![]() ![]() When it comes to Kaz/Oliver/Chase/Roman/Riker/Roman, I like *everything*, from romantic to graphically sexual. Best, of course, is both! And same for the Thundermans [and their various hot young guests]. But Hank, no. That's my preference for older characters in general, but I appreciate how others may disagree. Btw, when I read multiple chapters at a time, I typically roll my comments together and post them only to the last chapter read. But I see how that approach isn't so informative for you, so I'll try to leave more comments along the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like rading the romance between Kaz & Oliver. The flashbacks with the twins are amazing and a great read. But for the next chapter, I would really like to know what Experian has in store for Chase, & it would be cool if you could make it a "Meanwhile at the Davenport Penthouse..." chapter. |
![]() ![]() hey i know you're more of a disney channel author, but i was wondering if you could possibly make a story where hank and max thunderman from The Thundermans on Nickelodeon would teach billy thunderman about the gay life. for example they teach him how to jerk off and how to finger himself and about gay toys such as cock rings and butt plugs and after a few days of this, hank and max have a three way with billy. this idea just came to me and i really wanna see it happen so could you please write it? if you do decide to, can you please give a lot of details of billy and even hank admiring max's hairy-ness such as his pit hair, pubes, and ass hair? i would really appreciate this fanfic being written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the way you've intermingled past and present. What's not to like? Some of my fave characters engaged in mind blowing sex [loved the DP scene!] with a ton of equally hot flashbacks stirred into the mix. And now Experion lurkng. Perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another awesome chapter, as usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww, they're such a cute couple. :) If the rest of the flashbacks are like this one, I'm definitely looking forward to them. So Experion was the lucky guy who got to bust both of their cherries? I can't wait to see Oliver and Kaz compete over who takes Experion's - you know it's gonna end up in a dp, but with Chase being the "smartest man in the world," he'll find some way to turn it into a tp (triple penetration). :D |