Wow. Very well done. :)

I have to say it is good. Even f you ended it I say it is quite a short story.

I have to say it is good. Even f you ended it I say it is quite a short story.

I love your style, and the bits of krogan lore you're incorporating are fascinating! I hope you continue!

You put the lore that other stories lack or at least make it seem like it. I have to say this is really good.

What do you mean complete, I was enjoying that! :)

Great story, thanks for sharing.

I'm really enjoying this so far. Looking forward to seeing where you take it!