When will you update new chapters? It's been long without publishing.

I know I sent this in a message, but thought I'd post it as a review as well.

I loved how you wrote Jackie. In the author's note, you talk about how you wanted to write one thing, and the character took the story in a different direction. I know exactly as you feel. One of the ways I love describing fanfictions is to say I'm putting the characters in different situations to see how they act. I think if you get into the head of a character correctly, you are no longer writing. It almost feels like you are simply recording what happens next. It's one of the things I love about writing.

Again, fantastic second chapter. I loved it so much. It was great what you did with Jackie's first skate board. There is great interpretation of her and I think that the fact she went to Janna is great.

I can't wait to see what happens next, and what Jackie intends to do.

Yours in writing,
-Cindermane

Yayayay I love this story!

Hey. So I messaged you but thought I'd leave a review. It does look very promising, and potentially will go onto my favorite list (which is saying something).

Can't wait till Jackie comes into the picture. Jarco forever. In the summary, do you mean Jackie as the rival? And does she not want to be an obstacle to Star?

Just a few things. I love the little moments throughout. You do a really good job and describing what the characters are doing without the language being cumbersome.

I really like that final moment you have, with Marco and the laser puppies. I think that is so adorable and sweet and very much heartbreaking. Well done.

Looking forward to more.
-Cindermane

This seems promising!