| Reviews for Alice Lillian Potter |
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Wika0304 chapter 7 . 4/9/2019 please update |
Wika0304 chapter 1 . 4/9/2019 please do Alice x Laxus |
N Umbra chapter 7 . 5/19/2017 please please please write more! |
princess serenity0822 chapter 5 . 5/2/2017 I love this story I can't wait for more |
Sakura Lisel chapter 4 . 4/23/2017 Okay... when Ali heard about these 'relatives' she has, why didn't she flat out REFUSE to go? Especially once she realized exactly WHERE it was the old coot was taking her and her friends? Its only been TWO years since she last saw the Dursleys and soon as she saw exactly WHERE Dumbledore was trying to drop her off at AGAIN, probably instantly recognizing the neighborhood they were in as soon as they arrived, she should go into attack mode and demand to be taken elsewhere than be forced to stay THERE again for ANY reason, with Laxus and the others backing her up. *lol* |
Perseus12 chapter 1 . 4/17/2017 You reap what you sow, Dursleys. The consequence will be your DOWNFALL! |
Halariel chapter 1 . 4/16/2017 cool start of ur story. I especially like the fact that alice is going to kearn heavenly body magic. I hope there will be some dumbles and/ir weasley bashing. if you want to have an idea of how to get alice and her friends back to earth (if u wanna do that) then I'd suggest you to do it during fourth year because the goblet of fire teleports her and her friends back to hogwarts when it spits her name out. I really look forward to your other chapters! If u wanna have some inspiration, I'd suggest you to read "a magical sense" by centurion africanus. Its a really great fic! Anyway have much fun while writing your next chapter! |
anthony.pengelly.10 chapter 1 . 4/13/2017 good hope for more wot of ginny |
ChimaTigon chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 Will there be DumbleBashing? |