LOVE IT! 3

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as I read I kept thinking about how these chapters were based on fan metas and requests and I kept thinking "this is so messed up holy hell" but I couldn't stop reading. I had to keep reading because this was amazing. Like, I loved it. It was messed up, it was fluffy at times, the characters were well-done. All of it was amazing. Thank you for writing this.

Wow, he really broke Keith

This is getting better and better!

Love it! I've been looking for a KuroxKeith fic for too long!

1st chapter and i already like it!

I didn't know it was going to be like this.

"My revenge my happy ever after."- Armed and Ready from RWBY Volume 4 Soundtrack

My GOSH this story was a whirlwind of emotions, suspension and heart wrenching scenes. But a perfect ending for an angsty story :) Towards the end I kept thinking of the song I quoted up top, mostly because the person it's about went through a painful experience herself and had to struggle a lot to start feeling somewhat normal.
Anywho, it was awesome!

I loved it. Amazingly written, couldn't stop reading. Poor Keith went through so much, I can understand Shiro and others for wanting to kill Kuro on the spot.

The author notes are my favourite part of the story.

Hoooooooly moly! Sorry I didn't comment every chapter. I just zoomed through it since it was all there. But poor Keith! He's my baby and he doesn't deserve to struggle or be harmed in any way. It was gruesome in a lot of ways and torture should never be thought of as entertaining. But I'm a sucker for angst. It wasn't so gruesome that I couldn't get through it. So I applaud for you keeping it classy (if there's a way to actually do that). I wasn't expecting it to end the way it did, but I'm not suprised that Kuro couldn't get another chance at Keith. What I am suprised about what how quickly it all ended and in the manner it did. But overall, I was hurt and entertained all at the same time. Thanks for writing this! It turned out really good! (am I sick for liking this? Probably.)

Hi Again! You should totally consider writing one shots for this story. I understand if you want to move on from it, but I love your hurt!Keith so much, and I think you could do more with it if you want! Like I think a great hurt/comfort scene could deal with the fact that Kuro kissed Keith. Anyway, sorry for bugging, but I do want to say again that this was super nicely done!

OMG. This was beautiful and tragic and sweet and awful-aka everything good in the world of storytelling. You write hurt/comfort so well! I hope you continue you to do it! Thanks for the great read :)

Oh wow...his eyes...
And then closure
Man that was a ride and a half...