What did see come on man update

Really amazing and funny story ever read I can't wait read another chapter

This great I can't wait for the next update is rwbey storie going to be updated next as well

Hey Eternal! Glad to see ya back on your feet!...or rather back on your hands...okay nevermind...anyways! As always, good chapter, I am rather curious on who Seth was chasing. But anyways! I'll wait for the next chapter...on your other stories as well.

question well Seth have all three haki like Luffy?

Great chapter thanks for finally updating I really hope you try updating sooner.

It's good to see that your still continuing this. Love the new chapter, and keep up the good work.

Awesome job

I love this story! Keep up the good work!

OOH A MINK WITH A POWERFUL DEVIL FRUIT

If Seth takes the Rumble Rumble Fruit, would that make him a Thunder Cat?

I don't know if you were serious about stopping or not but if you ARE going to keep writing you really need to work on your grammar and you need to check your stories before uploading them because I saw a LOT of mistakes and some of your scenes were MISSING WORDS. You really need to work on that. But, other than that it's an interesting story and makes me wonder what will happen next. Peace out! Stay awesome!

Can you put shyarly and shirahoshi and reijn and baccarat and carina can you put them in the harem also I came up with 10 of harem story and they are maken-ki, senran kagura, naruto, queen's blade, majikoi oh samurai girl, street fighter, attack on titan, heaven's lost property and last buy not least hyakka ryouran samurai girls I can see these having an oc harem story it can even be an crossover of harem but I'll let you decide and please give me your honest opinion please and thank you.

can you put in carrot and wanda in the harem please they be great for the harem also keep the great work can't wait for the chapter please and thank you.

The last chapter killed me because im reading it today april 3rd, great story, a new oc character that knows how to use armament haki, luffy as well and they are both trained by garp, that changes a lot of things, like luffy not needing water to defeat crocodile and having a somewhat of a chance when they face kuzan. Gin deserved a chance to see the grandline, i dont know about aivida, i wonder who else is going to join the crew? In chapter 13, i think you have written luffy's and seth's bounties wrong, instead of 40.000.000 and 30.000.000, you have written 400.000.000 and 300.000.000, i actually got confused there asking myself when did we get to ennies lobby? I want to see more from the dragon part of seth's power and the evolution of the characters who are added by you in the strawhat crew. Till next chapter, update soon and keep up the good work, oh and congratulations in advance for the next chapter where you reach 100k words in this fic!