| Reviews for Taking the Maid Route |
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FlammPanzer chapter 1 . 3/30/2018 Interesting, gives fans the ending they wanted. |
Yerdesha chapter 1 . 1/25/2018 Good one. Liked it a lot! |
T.Dragon chapter 1 . 1/17/2018 Nice fic, short but sweet. And its actually true, as Shinichi does end up confessing his love to Myucel in the final volume of the Light Novels. Plus the confession even looks like a marriage proposal too! |
STARSONGPAPA chapter 1 . 1/6/2018 only three fanfics for Outbreak Company and I liked this one the best. |
Asatigre chapter 1 . 7/7/2017 Thank you for writing this! I liked your story and I thought it was cute. Your grammar was good for the most part but on other aspects of writing i honestly think you could stand to improve a bit. Pardon me if I'm wrong but for some reason I percieve you as someone who is quite young, about 15. If that is the case, you should be proud to have written something like this. I'm very sorry if i am wrong in my deduction but it's just that you reminded me of a younger me (I'm about 20 atm) and your writing had an aura of innocence. Anyways, if you have the interest and the time, I would suggest searching on youtube for brandon sanderson's lectures on creative writing, he's a famous fantasy author and his advice really helped me improve a lot and maybe you would find use in them as well. Take care and have a good day! |