| Reviews for Flying Solo |
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Tobalerone chapter 8 . 6/22 I love this! It's very fun. Man, too bad he got obliviated. Would have been cool if he had just kicked their asses and turned up at the bar like "yeah they were talking about rituals and dark lords, seemed sketch" I can't wait for people to notice his automail limbs and just in general realize he lived a very atypical life (and even eventually that he's from an entirely different world!) Too bad Al's not with him |
Mi.rnd chapter 1 . 2/2 it's been more than a year that you have made an update and I still have the hope that you'll keep writing, simply because it's such a good fic... why do I do this to myself? |
Zaire Giovanni chapter 8 . 5/29/2019 Esta historia se seguirá? me parece muy curiosa y divertida, la forma de actuar de Ed es inteligente y divertida me gustaría ver mas y ver si es capaz de adaptarse a la escuela |
Statess1 chapter 8 . 9/23/2018 I really hope u make Ed supper op and learn everything the school can offer in like one month, that would scare the shit out of everyone how smart and REALY strong he is( like bench press 2 hadgrids at once strong but he keeps geting stronger, also as fast as a cheta. ) Keep it up :) |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/22/2018 thanks for writing :3, fun fic to read |
TheAliasOfMyAlias chapter 8 . 8/5/2018 I can’t believe I haven’t seen this story before! I’m a pretty regular follower of the HPxFMA fandom, but I hadn’t seen your story until recently. I’m glad I did find it because, despite the fact that it seems like a pretty basic plot so far (not in a bad way, just that I’ve read many stories similar to this [and have enjoyed many of them]), there is something different about it that I can’t quite put my finger on. Maybe it’s the characterization or the seamless flow or even the small details, but I couldn’t stop reading. Your grammar and punctuation are near perfect considering the formatting and technical problems it seems like you’ve had and that’s a welcome relief from all the poorly written stories I’ve read in the past. I’ve seen that you’ve edited quite a few, if not all of the chapters and since I haven’t read the original, I can’t say if this version is any better, but I hope you’ve found that you’ve written a story you can enjoy writing and be proud of because I certain enjoyed reading it! I look forward to the next update |
Shia Rephic chapter 8 . 7/19/2018 Ha Malfoy deserves that WOOOO GO ED KICK HIS BUTT |
Seta88 chapter 8 . 7/18/2018 The chapter was good, I liked especially the way he found platform 9 3/4. Now a Little Question I was confused why your Story listed as completed at first I thought you have abandonned it and that this was the last chapter you would post. It would be a Little early into this fic, that you would create a Sequel. |
Anju Makaa chapter 7 . 6/30/2018 This is really good and o hope that you updated soon. Thanks! |
ManaketeSmoocher chapter 7 . 5/19/2018 I hope you can find some time to write more soon! This has been one of the more standout FMA/HP crossovers I’ve had the pleasure of reading |
Mining Socks chapter 7 . 4/6/2018 My guy... I am... Sssoooo close to passing out, but I carried on to get to this point. And glad am I ever that I did. You've got. Somethin special here in the genre of Ed goes to HOGWARTS. Which autocorrect has now decided is only acceptable in all caps Scar is a perfect cat, Ed is a clever shit, his impulsivity is on point, and you... Youse a good writerrrr. Only errors I saw were one instance of "ans" and "Edcautiously" at the end there. Good night moon |
Crane Socks chapter 5 . 4/6/2018 HE REALLY DID JUST CLEVER HIS WAY INTO HOGWARTS! IM SO PROUD OF HIM and you I mean, you wrote that! You fuckin wrote that! That was you! God bless Tom though, taking in a kid like that. Make him proud, Ed, |
Jalapeo Socks chapter 2 . 4/6/2018 Listen I'm not doing words so good today but this is a strong start and McBoatalot? Is possibly my most favorite thing. Goddamn I love fan fiction. Finally, representation for the actual ridiculous shit humans do |
FaelanaSnow chapter 7 . 3/8/2018 Wow. I'm just so amazed at finding another great crossover story and with a good plot too! Ed seems spot on in character wise, and I'm happy he's not perfect at everything like some other stories do, where Ed is thrown into another world he has no idea of understanding, and yet he learns the language in a matter of days and is perfect with all spells and blah, blah..so this only makes me enjoy your story even more! I love how he had to figure out how his alchemy worked in another world, and now he can use both, alchemy and magic and kick ass at the same time, like he did in the park, was it four men against one? I loved that. Anyway, I think this story is amazing so far and I just can't wait to read the next chapter! And for Ed to be in hogwarts. Thank you for sharing such an amazing story with us! Xoxo! |
Guest chapter 7 . 2/24/2018 I really like this story so far-I know you worry you might be messing up the characters, but I think you've done a solid job so far. Like, Ed would absolutely transmute a giant Al-replica for his room in those circumstances. He'd probably talk to it too. And I don't think he'd linger on his memory loss-I imagine he'd file it away for later, assuming he's been concussed and mostly forgetting about it until he discovers that Memory Charms are a thing. The only thing that seems weird is that Tom lets Ed stay for no charge, though I'm guessing it might be explained later. My two top theories are that Ed reminds him of his son so he decided to help OR somebody took notice of Ed's attempts at "magic" in Muggle London and is covering the charges so they can keep a better eye on him. Anyway, I'm looking forward to Ed's attempts at actual magic (and trying to fake his way through wizarding culture without knowing hardly anything about it, lolol). |