| Reviews for The Emperor and the Dark Mage |
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   XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 3 . 4/10 Yeah, no I can't read this anymore. I gave it a hell of a try, but when you have to interpret every chapter to actually understand it, it's annoying as hell. I can't even give advice on how to improve on this because it's just stuff that comes with experience in writing. I'll do the usual though. If you can try and get an editor. If you can't at least get Grammarly or some other grammar software to help mitigate some of these errors. I have a feeling I would have greatly enjoyed this story if the English were up to par with normal standards. |
| XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 2 . 4/10 This story is fairly interesting but the subpar grammar and spelling really bring it down for me. It's readable, but it's almost a chore at times having to constantly correct suffix and verb tense errors in your head. |
| FairyJuice chapter 6 . 2/17 This was a very enjoyable read. Lelouch had a great backstory with Zeref, and it was fun reading about Lelouch just doing whatever he wants since no one can stop him. Was hoping for lelouch x mavis. Really sad to discover that it was abandoned. |
| Synchronicity911 chapter 5 . 2/10 This story is really interesting! I have learned a lot from your magic storytelling and voice. Thanks for writing that! Hope I can see the next chapter someday. P/s: Was Walsingham 'the cat'? |
| KingAllen chapter 6 . 12/25/2019 Update! |
| Kinzuu chapter 6 . 11/14/2019 A great story, a shame is was abandoned |
| CamTheThief chapter 6 . 8/30/2019 What a fascinating little story... so fucking unfortunate that it has been abandoned. The immortal Lelouch trying to satisfy his own amusement as an extremely powerful mage... oh man the potential. Then you had to mention both C.C and Dimensional travel and get my hopes up for the future. Curse you for abandoning exceedingly well written and intriguing work, and please come back in a timely fashion. Cheers, mate. |
| Levin Kluge chapter 6 . 3/12/2019 Yo I like your story very much and I hope you continue very soon. |
| Slime Slayer chapter 6 . 3/1/2019 This fis is so good, hope you u continue with the good work |
| 4Dpuyopuyo chapter 6 . 2/18/2019 This is good |
| arga101 chapter 6 . 1/1/2019 I've never watched Fairy Tail yet this fic is just very attracting. A very nice backstory kinda with Lelouch and Zeref. They were suprisingly well together. Now Natsu and friends are here! Hope you continue! Keep writing! |
| VermilionShade chapter 6 . 12/27/2018 No parings please |
| ikusatsunagi chapter 6 . 12/14/2018 Will you continue? PD: Lelouch x Mavis XD |
| ikusatsunagi chapter 4 . 12/14/2018 Lelouch x Mavis |
| ikusatsunagi chapter 2 . 12/14/2018 Lelouch x Mavis 3 |
