This was wonderful, but can't he just use the injury from his severed arms. Bertholt must not have been feeling a lot of animosity torwards them because when he wants to, Bertholt's transformation can be explosive, his size slows him down but it makes him stronger, he can release steam that varies in humidity from people saying 'its hot' to people saying things like 'i can't take this anymore' while they're being burned to a crisp.

Pretty good

update please

UPDAAAAAAATE! very interesting turn of events, so wasn't expecting a betrayel like that from Bert! great Chapter!

3 chapters in and this already has my seal of approval. Nice job! :)

Update please

ah what a return! a new variant of Titan, this time it was a shifter. as for the motivations I'm very curious. either way I'm glad you updated, didn't want the story to be abandoned.

please update

please new chapter

please do the next chapter

This chapter had very quick development of Eren, and I felt it was a bit sudden. Regardless, don't forget to start new paragraphs with every new speaker, and I am looking forward to seeing where your story goes

I like your story, but there's three things that I feel you should address in your writing.

1- Eren went OOC too quickly for the pace of the story. Over time, the characters will stray from their original temperament, but that is ok- it means you've developed the characters. But try not to change them too drastically.

2- This one is very important. When you are writing, you don't have to make a bold Authors Note to tell us which character we are following (POV). In this story, if you were to take out where you clarify the POV, you would see that the story still always makes sense. Because you are using third person, we learn which characters are speaking and acting by their reference in the story.

You'll notice, though, that if you take out the bold transitions/clarifications, the story will seem slightly choppy, and this is an easy fix; just add a short transition sentence that indicates a passage of time. (EX Eren's head hit the wall for hours and hours to ease the boredom he felt. Then, Eren sat up straight in surprise, his wrists caught on the chains.)

3- The final thing you should change is any time a new person speaks, you need to make a new paragraph. There should never be two people thinking and/or thinking in the same paragraph. If you don't separate the speakers, the story gets cluttered and hard to follow.

Anyways, I really like the story, and look forward to reading more!

please update amazing show some more romance from eren and annie but don't rush your amazing take your time

Suggestion you can introduce manga characters in the story here is their name and appereance Falco eleven years old with blonde hair, Gabi eleven years old and she is Reiner cousin anyway this is just a suggestion o would like to share o do not know why i would suggest these particular characters but they have a certain importance in the manga and will have on the anime maybe in season 4 if we have one someday

holy shit what a return! glad to see this!