| Reviews for The Amazing World of Elmore |
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   acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 8 . 9/3/2017 Heh, this is just too good. Nice job. Keep the good writing. |
| Dragonlover chapter 8 . 9/3/2017 That makes sense. Thank you for not giving up on the story, but if you've lost your passion for it then I wouldn't want you to force yourself to work on it. Just keep doing what you love. Thanks for reading |
| lexboss chapter 8 . 9/3/2017 Nice one |
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 7 . 7/31/2017 Another good one here, and yeah, Mr Robinson is a jerk, so guess him getting this kind of treatment is a karmic punishment. Keep the good writing. |
| lexboss chapter 7 . 7/31/2017 Nice |
| Dragonlover chapter 6 . 7/2/2017 I really like this chapter! Sussie is always welcome in my book, but otherwise I can't think of any characters for you to focus on. Don't worry if you're having trouble writing new chapters, I love them no matter how long it takes. Besides, I'd rather have a really great chapter once a month than a bad chapter once a day. Just keep doing what your doing. Thanks for reading! |
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 Very cool one here. Having Mr Small as the main character is s a good excuse to have several characters at once due to his therapist's work. Keep the good writing. |
| Villicus chapter 6 . 7/1/2017 No problem at all, dude. This kind of stuff is really difficult to write consistently, so don't beat yourself up. You've gotten this far. Keep going, I'm sure you'll find something. I don't have much to offer, but maybe Josh could be an interesting character to include. |
| GlitchybombsFan chapter 5 . 6/12/2017 *patiently and hopefully waits for a chapter about Bomb Guy* :) |
| Slake Jericho chapter 1 . 6/9/2017 I LOVE THESE STORIES THEY'RE SO AWESOOOME! Hey btw check out my TAWOG stories, and leave a review (I love reviews! :D), I think you'll like them! You're the one that got me writing Gumball stories in the first place! |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/8/2017 maybe you could do something with the school librarian. you know, that tree lady |
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/31/2017 The construction workers are pretty underutilized, maybe you could do something about them. |
| acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 5 . 5/30/2017 Heh, this was just too good. Keep the good writing. |
| Dragonlover chapter 5 . 5/30/2017 What a good chapter! I hope the writers block doesn't come back because your story's awesome! Thanks for reading! |
| lexboss chapter 5 . 5/30/2017 Cool |
