| Reviews for Within Interest |
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sayantan2201 chapter 8 . 10h You know, this story has everything that it needs to become a really well written story. I really hope that you dont abandon it. |
PattycNyc chapter 8 . 7/29 Please don't stop writing. This is awesome. |
Adimera chapter 8 . 7/24 plz come back. this is story is VERY different from other stories. i would love to see more of this. |
Tzarista chapter 8 . 7/21 this story is very interesting so far ... the inner workings of the mind of many characters and the spark (naruto) to set them off |
FadilShameer chapter 8 . 7/15 Damnit man why you Leave us on cliffhangers for these stories please update soooonnn! |
Trillian1228 chapter 8 . 7/10 This story is fantastic. I read ch1 to ch 8 without stopping today. I love the premise, Naruto being so observant, and smart, but oblivious. The character development of Ino and Iruka has been very interesting. I hope you someday pick this back up. I really like your writing style, and this is a great story. |
P A N I C mmm chapter 8 . 7/7 What an amazing read, The premise is so simple and yet, in the hands of a capable writer, That's enough to make something so beautiful. Amazing work, I'll keep reading your other works, I think I fall in love with your writing style. |
Shifuru chapter 8 . 7/2 Aww, man! Wish there was more of this story. I'd absolutely love to see what happens on Iruka's part, what with him using another style of teaching. |
DarthGhengis chapter 8 . 7/1 This was great to read, and I couldn't stop from chapter 01 to chapter 08! Hope you have some inspiration for this fic soon, as I really like the premise. Naruto being exceptionally observational yet still oblivious? All the ways this seems to be rippling out through the story.. Most authors when using such a slight change write one or two chapters explaining what is different, followed by a time-skip so they don't have to actually write how it develops. It's great to see all these changes in detail! |
moodysavage chapter 8 . 6/15 oh my gosh! Why isn't there more of this story!? I love the progression... the different people noticing that Naruto notices things... a lot! I actually love that the story is totally NOT told with any of Naruto's thoughts. It keeps me guessing how much of Naruto's actions are deliberate. And I love how different Naruto related things are causing changes in other people's actions and sense of purpose. It's super awesome cool how subtle this is... I love it. Hope you write more someday! |
ProperPie chapter 8 . 6/14 PLEASE TELL ME THIS WILL BE UPDATED AGAIN! I love this concept and I’ve enjoyed the story so far by a landslide compared to most others! I really hope it will be updated because man is it a work of art! |
Yoinkur chapter 1 . 6/12 Just read this story for the 3rd time, and I have to say it was just as amazing as ever! I don't know if you're ever going to pick it up again, but thanks for the amazing read! |
Amun565 chapter 8 . 6/10 This has been amazing. I hope you come back to it one day! |
Bruhther chapter 8 . 6/5 Ho Lee Shit, I Need MORE |
NineYetis chapter 8 . 6/1 This was great. |