Reviews for Within Interest
sayantan2201 chapter 8 . 10h
You know, this story has everything that it needs to become a really well written story. I really hope that you dont abandon it.
PattycNyc chapter 8 . 7/29
Please don't stop writing. This is awesome.
Adimera chapter 8 . 7/24
plz come back. this is story is VERY different from other stories. i would love to see more of this.
Tzarista chapter 8 . 7/21
this story is very interesting so far ... the inner workings of the mind of many characters and the spark (naruto) to set them off
FadilShameer chapter 8 . 7/15
Damnit man why you
Leave us on cliffhangers for these stories please update soooonnn!
Trillian1228 chapter 8 . 7/10
This story is fantastic. I read ch1 to ch 8 without stopping today. I love the premise, Naruto being so observant, and smart, but oblivious. The character development of Ino and Iruka has been very interesting. I hope you someday pick this back up. I really like your writing style, and this is a great story.
P A N I C mmm chapter 8 . 7/7
What an amazing read, The premise is so simple and yet, in the hands of a capable writer, That's enough to make something so beautiful.

Amazing work, I'll keep reading your other works, I think I fall in love with your writing style.
Shifuru chapter 8 . 7/2
Aww, man! Wish there was more of this story. I'd absolutely love to see what happens on Iruka's part, what with him using another style of teaching.
DarthGhengis chapter 8 . 7/1
This was great to read, and I couldn't stop from chapter 01 to chapter 08! Hope you have some inspiration for this fic soon, as I really like the premise. Naruto being exceptionally observational yet still oblivious? All the ways this seems to be rippling out through the story.. Most authors when using such a slight change write one or two chapters explaining what is different, followed by a time-skip so they don't have to actually write how it develops. It's great to see all these changes in detail!
moodysavage chapter 8 . 6/15
oh my gosh! Why isn't there more of this story!? I love the progression... the different people noticing that Naruto notices things... a lot! I actually love that the story is totally NOT told with any of Naruto's thoughts. It keeps me guessing how much of Naruto's actions are deliberate. And I love how different Naruto related things are causing changes in other people's actions and sense of purpose. It's super awesome cool how subtle this is... I love it. Hope you write more someday!
ProperPie chapter 8 . 6/14
PLEASE TELL ME THIS WILL BE UPDATED AGAIN! I love this concept and I’ve enjoyed the story so far by a landslide compared to most others! I really hope it will be updated because man is it a work of art!
Yoinkur chapter 1 . 6/12
Just read this story for the 3rd time, and I have to say it was just as amazing as ever! I don't know if you're ever going to pick it up again, but thanks for the amazing read!
Amun565 chapter 8 . 6/10
This has been amazing. I hope you come back to it one day!
Bruhther chapter 8 . 6/5
Ho Lee Shit, I Need MORE
NineYetis chapter 8 . 6/1
This was great.
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