Darkstorm is a pretty good villain - unpredictable and is actually good at deception (and not giving away all his plans via monologing). The only gripe I have is that his name sounds stupid but idk what I'd use instead

lmao blackjack breaking the 4th wall

i'm getting flash vibes

Chapter nine seems very similar to that one scene in Justice League (forgot which exact movie) where the heroes are all fighting Superman

This has to be a joke, right? You can't just suddenly rip off Superman.

It would be cool if you pair Percy with thalia

cute words!

Wtf did I just read?

The bullets were like pebbles moving through syrup but he still got his ass kicked?

Darkstorm- appears

Percy- Im just going to get rid of all my speed now when I fight this guy

Nooooooooooo, please continue, I need it.

The beginning of the chapter was really a lot like the flash, with the whole, 'can' 't timetravel anymore and need you but want to kill you'
It was maybe a little bit unoriginal in my opinion though it fitted the situation. Still thanks for the chapter.
Keep up the grind, it's really appreciated ️

I love your story, I have read everything up until here in one go and I'm not able to lay the story down.

I really like this story but as a Christian I need to point out that the Christian religion is very much alive and such

Please for all our sakes, maintain silence and never write again