Wish you would come back to this

Cool stuff! Fire bolt is a good name

Can’t wait for Harry to fly the ghost! Orange is fitting

Big cliffhanger! Loved this chapter! Also: “What would a Star Wars telly show be like without at least one Jedi in it?" Stat Warship Resistance, that’s what.

Are they going to meet the rebels?

That's not how the Force works! Or Han Solo would have told you something like this. As it stands I'm a casual so I don't care one way or another.

Wow. What a storyline! Will you continue?

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wait. is harry so good at flying losing his glasses doesn't even impede him? cause dang that's really cool.

Great and interesting story.

Nice

So I have enjoyed this fic pretty much so far as I like Dudley redeemed stories (although I prefer them to also be Dudley/Harry but most don't)

With that said, I feel like you should consider doing an event that leads to Harry and Dudley dealing with their past. Like I said, I like redeemed Dudley but I can't help but feel that sometimes the Harry and Dudley dynamic is a bit too fast considering their past.

Granted, I also think Harry has just been bottling things up, but I feel like it should eventually come to a breaking point and cause Dudley to also face his past actions, while also showing the rest of the crew.

Also, will Dudley reveal to characters certain information they didn't know before. Like "hinting" that Ahsoka should go to Tatooine or somehow leading the rebels to Dagoba to encounter Yoda. Or during the conflict with Vader, revealinng how he and Harry know who he is and taunting him. Although, I really see Harry doing this for some reason but Harry's knowledge is too lacking. And by taunting I mean something along the lines of stating how Anakin hides behind his Vader persona and how Padme would be horrified by how he became

Actually I am excited about this story as I am also a fan of the cartoon. are you talking about the series 4 the try foil inter-septor fighter?

I quite like what I have just read. You have done a fantastic job of keeping the characters in their personalities and allowing them to grow and advance in the new world they now reside in. on top of that, you also do a good job of showing the problems of their old world are still important and show the characters cant simply ignore those problems. I look forward to the next update.

look forward to the next update, chapter five was good. currently i think Harry stands to learn Juyo, the same form as maul, the emotions he has will aid him in the use of Form 7

loving this fic, on chapter 2 and looking forward to more