Spooky but cool. Neatly done.

Awwwwwww harry! You pure pure soul! I love it so much! Short but adorable!

Aww!

We can be ghosts together akjsdhwdfoqfpiq Harry, you adorable, adorable, pure soul.

oh wow that was just so sweet I loved it

This was still pretty sad despite the happy ending - totally bittersweet!

Aw, you made my dead little heart beat with this. :) Haha, just kidding. About the dead part, that is.

Anyway, I loved the atmosphere/premise of the story. I think Harry remained true to his character, especially when he stubbornly chose to become a ghost to be with his beloved. I feel like this was a great introductory fic, though. *gently prods* It'd be amazing if there were a sequel or epilogue... *wink, wink, nudge, nudge* Lol, I really enjoyed this.

THANK YOU, SAM! I loved the story in its entirety, and I'm so grateful that you took the time to create it. Especially since it was Voldy/Harry! Haha, for some reason people don't seem to like it... *ignores the fact that they're decades younger/older than each other*

Lovin' it,
Krissy (Fire)

[The form nodded, his translucent eyes showed an emotion Harry had never seen...] Since these are both independent clauses, the comma should be a semicolon. I also wonder what that emotion might be? It's hard to gauge from the story, so maybe some visual description would help.

[The ghost was quiet for a moment, before he finally answered.] comma unneeded

I like the explanation of Voldemort's fondness for Harry! It seems plausible.

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[Never see you family] your

Interesting! It's hard for me to believe that Harry would choose an eternity with Voldemort instead of living a full life with his friends whom he loved so much, but his explanation was reasonable.

Nicely done!

cool

Kind of beautiful and certainly tender. An original ficlet for sure.

so they are going to haunt toether. Maybe even scare Lucius to death for killing Harry . that would really be funny, thank you loved it.

I like this fanfic its cute.

I like this fanfic. Its cute!