Reviews for Capturing Her Damaged Heart
llendais chapter 53 . 35m
Aaaaa I'm so happy you updated. I never want to stop reading this, but alas, real life right? I am so in love with Lucy's progress! Veryy! And the reunion! I hope you know what I mean when I say AAAAAAAAAAAAAA. That. That's me right there. The tension between Cana and Levy's been building so I'm glad atleast it's going to be addressed soon, but I feel like something's going to happen with Gildarts back. What will Natsu's reaction to Lucy being a runner though? I think it's going to be fun LOL but with Hibiki and Loke around, it's sure to be interesting.

Goodluck with your work and congrats on 400k! Can't wait for next time :)
Perfect Memories chapter 53 . 47m
I had a feeling Loke and Lucy were going to recognize each other. curious as to how that will turn out, their small reunion and if there is an reacquainted feelings or not.

I absolutely love this chapter. I love the story. You have done a damn-tastic job on building Lucy into the person she's become. Great character building. I'm also antsy to see the Gildarts-Cana reunion and how she will react with him going back to Hargeon and if she will follow...
MeteorWars chapter 53 . 53m
thanks for the update. the reunion part was perfect! i love it. definitely feel natsu and lucy emotion 333
Mandapandaa chapter 53 . 54m
Oh god oh god oh god
Prick 'n Improper chapter 53 . 1h
THIS SO FREAKIN AWESOME OH MY GOSH I’M SO HAPPY YOU FINALLY UPDATED!

Thank you so much! This chappie is so fcking great, I love everything about iiiit. Hibiki and Lucy’s interaction is so adorbs (I can feel the guy slowly falling for her lol, who wouldnt?) I feel so sad for Cana, cant imagine what she’ll feel now knowing that Gildarts wouldn’t stay long. I wonder who the other 4 new people are? AND OMIGASH, the anticipated fiance was Loke ALL ALONGGGGG damn gurl, I cant wait for Loke and Lucy to interactttt, hope they don’t have bad blood with each other, I’d be such a shame. I’m so so so looking forward to Natsu and Lucy’s moments next chappie! Hope Natsu somehow realizes his feelings for Lucy knowing he has potential rivals now.

ANOTHER MONTHLONG WAIT, BUT I AM SURE IT WILL BE WORTH ITTTT

HOPE YOU’RE SAFE ALWAYSSS
Lovesmutbabe chapter 53 . 2h
OMGGGGGG I'M SO HAPPY! thank you for the new chapter! I'm always excited to read your story! So proud of Lucy, she's come so far and is getting stronger everytime :) and awww my heart goes out to Cana, and I wonder how Gildarts being back but not staying will affect her :( the Nalu Reunion thoooo! Love love love it! They missed eachother so much, excited for them to catch-up on things and Natsu finding out Lucy being a runner and her progress! AHHH and lastly, Lokeeee omg, can't wait to read more about him, and I wonder how his reunion with Lucy will go, and Natsu's reaction to him being Lucy's ex-fiance! What a cliffhanger! Looking forward to the next chapter huhu!
FartsnickleNalu chapter 53 . 2h
YOU CANT JUST END IT THERE I NEED MORREEE! In all seriousness though this story has progressed so flawlessly and I find myself anxiously waiting for another chapter every time. Absolutely incredible.
Shonix13 chapter 53 . 2h
I thought it was cute and perfect their reunion.
52dreamer52 chapter 53 . 2h
Ahh! I cannot WAIT for the next chapter to come out (although I totally would)! I loved their reunion so much. It was nice and sweet and all things lovely. I'm kinda nervous for the next chapter because Lucy's emotions are kinda hard to read about Loke for me...but hopefully, they can be friends...? Anyways, amazing job, as always. This chapter was great.
BeachBumBabe chapter 53 . 2h
Hey! Thanks so much for the update! I've been really loving this story and the character developments. I'm so glad they're all back together! The Cana and Left scene was definitely tough, I hope Cana is able to find some peace. Yay Natsu and Lucy are back together! I can't wait for him to find out all the progress she's made :) I don't remember much about her fiance but I am looking forward to seeing how they interact.

I'm glad things are going well for you personally! I appreciate you sharing your struggles as I've just begun writing and it can be hard! I love the story I've come up with but it's definitely going to take a while to flesh out. I'm rewriting the first couple chapters now so they can be better :)
Doginshoe chapter 53 . 2h
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

That’s it. That’s my whole review.

Kidding! But seriously, this whole chapter made my heart start beating out of my chest. I love love love love Lucy interacting with Hibiki. They’re so cute and it’s so nice she has friends outside of Natsu. And Levy and Cana. The scene was *chef kiss.* I definitely feel sorry for Cana, cause even tho she is partly to blame, she’s definitely been manipulated by people that are older than her and preying on those issues she has from her dad. I wanted to cry when she said she didn’t want to live- being in a zombie world would definitely make you ask what the point of it all is. If I don’t get bitten today, what about tomorrow? So many things could affect them like disease, starvation, zombies, wild animals... It makes me want to punch Guildarts in the face lol. I know he’s happy, but does he not give a single shit about his daughter? How can he feel good about himself and start a new family when he couldn’t even do a good job with his only daughter. I hope he at leasts asks Cana to come to Hargeon with him, cause it’d be nice for him to put in the effort. I know Cana wouldn’t leave her friends or Fairytail tho but possibly they could visit each other? Idk. I’ll have to wait and see! now... THE HUG. It was perfect. My hands were sweating and when he ran for her at full speed and then she met him halfway I- ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It was amazing. It was exactly how I pictured it in my head! Completely perfect. I love that they just held each other, letting themselves be completely wrapped up in the others company. Thank you for the amazing update. It was well worth the wait.

NOW LETS BRING ON THE CONFRONTATION!
sonikastalker chapter 53 . 3h
AH YESS FINALLY THE REUNION! *chef’s kiss* I CAN DIE IN PEACE LOL!

THAT CLIFFHANGER AT THE END! I SCREAMED SO LOUD! HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER MONTH OR SO HUHUHU CAN’T WAIT!

*sigh* I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH!
Raquenzel chapter 53 . 3h
I CALLED IT
I mean I thought it, multiple times, and I just knew they would know each other, but damn! Ahhh I’m so excited! I’m so excited for the changes and Natsu and Lucy’s reunion and gah I’m just so happy. My heart breaks for Cana but I’m sooooo looking forward to seeing what happens next. Will Loke reveal who she is? To him it’s not exactly a secret, right? So many questions.
Needless to say, this remains a favorite story. I love it so
helloimsandy chapter 53 . 3h
The natsu and lucy hug! My heart. Great chapter 3
animagirl127lover chapter 53 . 3h
I have been waiting for this for what feels like months! I don’t like how Cana is coping but I guess everyone has their own way of coping be it a good or a bad way. I also love how Levy reacted cause I know that’s what I would have done. THE PLOT TWIST AT THE END! I was expecting Dan or someone else to be the fiancé but I should have seen that coming. Anyway I still love the way you write your story and ill wait till the end.
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