yooo I been waiting for months dog where them chapters at ... its always the good arthurs that quit

Yeah this story went fron damn this is interesting to fuck this trash. Good try author but you suck camel balls

Cringe and gay. No

Awesomeness continue please

Finally it was time, I'm glad you started to continue this story. Things will get interesting now that Salem is looking for the Dragon Balls and Team Rwby will do everything to stop it, I guess the rest of Team JNPR will soon join the fight.

Chichi is a Bitch in this that deathbed promise she forced outta Goku is utter bull making a Martial artist stop fighting is the equivalent of telling a talented Musician to never play music again and Goku is a Sayan tforcing them to stop fighting is like forcing a Shark to stop swimming ...its fatal

I know there is no reason, at least not yet, to bring in SSJ4 but I like the idea of it being inverse to GT Goku. Going from old to young again IDK I found that cool to think about.

Who is it at the end? the only people I can think of is ether Piccolo or maybe Uub? and hes a stretch.

I FELT this entire fight! Amazing work!

My favorite part is when Goku goes to leave and Vegeta gives chase only to stop when Goku spins to glare at him. Waiting for Vegeta to cross the line he created and he is frozen with the same promise that he just gave Kakarot.

"Cross that line and I won't hold back."

I swear it felt like Goku was about to go
Super Saiyan...4! And WHOOP HIS ASS!

I half expected it to be Baby still in Vegeta lol.

There is NO canon.

That has to be Trunks cause if vegeta made it this long trunks must have to do to being younger

Anyways, it's clear at this point that Remnant is suppose to be Earth and Aura is suppose to be Ki. I hope you explain this because it makes no sense. Remnant has been almost entirely different than the Dragon Ball Earth for thousands of years, also, if this was Earth, it doesn't make sense that no one from the Dragon Ball series aside from Goku, Vegeta, Popo, Buu, and the Gods are still alive. Goku and Vegeta should still have living children. Even if you argued that half Saiyans don't have the age delay, Goku and Vegeta should still have grandkids or great grandkids at least, the fact that all of them are supposedly gone is kind of ridiculous, especially because the Saiyan race wouldn't go extinct that easily. Also if this is suppose to be a merging of the universes then shouldn't Broly still be a live on Vampa? And when it comes to Aura, Ki can't heal people, and the only other thing Aura has been stated to do is act as a shield for the user, Ki can act as a shield, be used as a ranged attack, be used to fly, enhance the users strength, speed, and every other physical aspect I can think of including senses, as well as some more diverse things like teleportation or strength multiplication if used correctly, Aura and Ki have only one true similarity, and that is both being a variation of energy that every living thing has and can use if they know how to, so just saying that both energies are the same, makes no sense. If you explain all of this in the future then forget this review even existed.

So basically just Rory Mercury but slightly different? Kind of lazy tbh, but whatever, at least it'll be easy for me to imagine what she looks like.

I still don't completely agree with the promise Chi-Chi wanted him to make sounding realistic, but it makes more sense now, on top of that, I loved this chapter, the first chapter of this story I like a lot, the other chapters were good but not this good.

I think it's a little ridiculous that Chi-Chi would want him to stop fighting to be honest, what reason would she have for that?