That is so Shao Khan. Revealing that he is not the biological father of Kitana to Jade. And instead of killing her on the spot, he spares her to prepare for her fight with Tanya, confirming his smug confidence that the revelation was totally irrelevant and that he has complete control over everything. Also, I would’ve loved to see more Nash and Riana’s interactions with Ferra/Torr and Bo Rai Cho, but since they know of the Emperor’s plans, they are pretty much in a race against time. Looking forward to the next chapter!

What a messed up chapter.

Everything begins to unwind in the Netherrealm. Nash finds himself on the wrong end of a man's ultimate fantasy (minus the dead part). He found an unorthodox way to free Sindel first of her condition, but there is still the matter of Kitana and Jade. Quan Chi's not making the situation any easier as he now summons another dark figure to join in the fray.

Meanwhile, Kristina once again finds herself in an awful predicament. This time, concerning her heart. It's clear that Ermac and Erron are at the forefront of her mind. The question is that she can't decide which one would be better suited for her. However, this should be the last thing she should be thinking about as there's still a war to be fought. Better make a decision quickly.

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Man, I’m feeling some sympathy from the exiled and punished ones in this story. Mixed emotions and humanizing the Outworlders make it even more believable to read. But there is always a chance for redemption, Kitana understands that.

Well this is a shocking turn of dragged this on for so long, I didn’t think Nash and Riana would be caught that fast. And now things are really looking up for Kristina. Also, the cracks of Riana’s trauma are starting to sho and it’s all because of her horny little brother. What else is going to happen next?!

I’mma call this the listening chapter here are simply some things people need to understand simply by listening to others instead of making prelapses in judgement. Bryan judges Nash and Azril for not drinking alcohol without their reasons why. Also, Nash accuses Reptile of raping his sister without first wanting to hear his side of the story. The only ones that were willing to listen were Riana, Azril, and Kitana since they were considering all the pieces of information that can come into play before making decisions.

What goes around comes around. Trauma compliments trauma. Which is something Azril, Riana, and Jade understand. I like this chapter because it gives us glimpses into their wounded souls, the ugly parts of their characters that they would rather block out. This is, therefore, the beginning of their healing process, since they have mentors and friends who are willing to challenge them to face their dark pasts.

I like the fact that Mileena is a sympathetic character. A girl cloned and hated by Kitana and bears uncontrollable instincts. Also, I love the can of worms that spill out of the OCs and the MK characters

I like the fact that Mileena is a sympathetic character. A girl cloned and hated by Kitana and bears uncontrollable instincts. Also, I love the can of worms that spill out for the OC’s and the original MKCs. And the cliffhanger you chucked was well executed.

It’s heating up! It’s heating up! Azril defying yet impressing the emperor Shao Khan and Kristina helping her “boyfriends” out in taking down Shao Khan. These scenes cleverly demonstrate the skills and worth of the two opposite main characters and combatants. Sometimes the best way to fight is to negotiate and strategize your way with the least amount of bloodshed. Excellent chapter!

Damn! Way to go girl! That was the perfect way to set up a sex scene! A mix of awkwardness, tension, and intimacy all in one bite. The timing for it was stellar!

QUAN CHI, YOU SICK FUCK! Using the 3 zombified Edenians as vectors to seduce Nash... that baldheaded penis... Anyway, I agree with you about Kotal. Him perishing in MK11 is an error I will correct myself in my story, as I did in Legacies where Chris stopped Sindel from killing almost everyone, sparing Kotal the same grim fate. Nice work!

I got a feeling that that war hammer wasn’t there by coincidence. After all, every piece of the puzzle is about to be put in place. And I enjoyed watching the oc’s stay on their heels for the big event. And who is this unamed character? Tune in next time on THE DISCIPLES!

Riana and Reptile are so peachy, aren’t they? A combat to the death to see if they’re compatible for life! And just when things are starting to improve for Nash, it gets worse at every turn! lmao. I wonder where Mileena went off to. I assume Shang Tsung is dealing with her as I write this review. How did she react to Nash’s punishments? Oh well, I like the balance between the emotional moments of Nash and Riana. With the dark scenes filling up the reader’s imagination, it’s refreshing to give some light-hearted touches

Will Nash survived being gang raped by three hot naked women brainwashed like zombies? Will the Kristina smut you're working on gonna cure the poor guy of his near-death-by-sex experience after Quan Chi has been dealt with? Stay tune.

By the way, when did Shang Tsung get a black eye in the first place? Don't recall him getting one in one of these previous chapters.