Reviews for Baby Bird
Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 6/24
Pffft "that's not the way humans feed their babies." LMAO
AnimeCutlass chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
Well, a bit fandom blind here, but let's go! So... Raven barfed on Yang? Okay... relatable... Maybe Tai should hire a babysitter. Overall, there are no grammatical or verbal mistakes and also some nice humor and cuteness. But there's the lack of details which I'll ignore since this is a drabble.
Good job.
Lamia of the Dark chapter 1 . 10/11/2017
I thought I had reviewed this already, but apparently not...

Raven's reaction to trying to change a diaper is very relatable, because poop is gross and I would probably throw up on a baby too if I tried to change a poopy diaper.

I think Tai's joke is perfectly hilarious, although it's understandable why Raven doesn't. XD

Poor Raven.
CFVY chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
Heya.

It's a cute story and all. I do believe that Raven would be thoroughly discouraged by the idea of taking care of Yang, once she found out how complicated and messy it can get. I think Tai, maybe having grown up in a more human background, is a better caretaker than Raven could ever be.

This is a nice, tidy drabble. I'd usually ask for more detail/meat in the story, but this minimalist approach definitely works with what you were going for.

I like the part about Raven looking at Yang like she's afraid. That was probably (maybe) meant for humor. But I think it could definitely be apart of Raven's viewpoint towards young Yang. In this story, it's obvious she stayed with her family. But I think there would definitely be a lot of obstacles to overcome. She would most likely have no idea about how to raise a child, and that definitely shows here.

That being said, this is very charming and lovely. I'd enjoy seeing more RWBY fanfictions from you.
Dragon MoonX chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
I really liked there part where he told her "I know you're a bird, but that's not the way humans feed their babies." It was a clever response that was also quite humorous.

Poor Raven. I guess dealing with the stinky, poopy diaper was too much for her. Can't say I blame her. Trying to change a dirty diaper would probably make me want to throw up too.

This was a fun little story with just the right amount of humor and cuteness. Keep up the good work.
Mew Shadowfang chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
Seeing the phrase 'the baby shit itself' males me laugh uncontrollably XD
TheTrueOverlordBear chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
Yeah, I can imagine hilariously awkward moments from Mama Raven if she decided to stay with Tai and Yang, alright.