This is really detailed and mysterious. I like how you had the doctors thoughts hypothesizing and trying to think through consequences. I love the adventure. River made me laugh. I wonder why Harry didnt seem to like Inara.

Hmm... Hadn't thought of it that way before, but there is a bit of truth to that statement, Harry is alive, but he doesn't age, nor can he be killed (that we know of). I am curious about his reaction to Inara though. I look forward to the next installation. Thank You. TTFN

The sheer depth of these two chapters was fantastic.

Lol! Thank you for writing this story. I hope you update soon xoxo

Thats awesome one of the most incedible idea of story with Harry Potter which I ever red. Im waiting for next chepter

Wonderful start - I am now awaiting the next chapter - I hope it doesn't take too long to turn up.

Until then,

- Mark A Heffron -

Post the next chapter already!

Amazing start! Please continue this!

I love this story

Okay! Just read both chapters and THIS IS THE BEST START TO ANY POTTER STORY I HAVE READ SINCE THE LAST FOUR YEARS I'VE BEEN READING STORIES HERE!
That being said, I truly hope you keep going with this. This is too good to kill by not updating, so please, please, PLEASE UPDATE... and as often as you can!
I've favorites and saved both this as well as you!

You do know how to end a chapter, ma’am.

So River really IS a witch (but as Mal said, she’s our witch), which makes Simon a Squib.

AHH! What happens NEXT?!

Really, I like where it seems you’re going with this, and I hope you come back to it.

Hey, this looks pretty good so far. Inspired by Browncoat, Green Eyes, was it? Good taste, that's an old favorite of mine.

I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

*Added to watchlist

Ha ha ha! this is a great story. I love River's reaction, can't wait for their response. :D