Um, hello, hi, yes-

You ruined my heart. This one really hurt; I could feel the pit of my lungs tighten. This is not fair.

Thanks, I'm crying.

A few changes, and this would be a Tragedy. You hint at it, certainly.

I'm crying. I'm crying even though I didn't cry since seemingly half an eternity. Great, heartbreaking story

that was a beautiful and heartbreaking story you'd done
*grab a tissue

Okay, I told myself I'd write my review when I'm done reading this but I just can't. Oh my! First, we wonder what the hell is happening. By the way, I think there's still one or two mistakes here and there, like a word or part repeated. I also wonder why Sonoko and Shinichi change the way they call each other that often. They should stick to a way, probably Sonoko and Shinichi seeing their relationship, even when they're pissed off with each other, no?
About the end... Did Ran married Araide? x)
Oh my, that fic... It's great, but I still want more. I can't say much useful stuff, my mind is kind of stuck with all the "oh my, that is so sad, what the... what happened".

Damn, I'm crying. Heh. Who knew I'd cry because of a fanfic. My sister is laughing at me because I'm crying to a fanfic

shit.. stop it, already.. I'm embarrassing myself by bawling my eyes out

beautiful but heartbreaking

i hope the next fic would be nice and sweet

good job!

Nice story, but I think you uploaded the wrong file. This one has all your mistakes in it. (Hadhadn't, ,. sS)

First of all, I want to say that this is utterly overly heart breaking. Right now, I am soooo looking forward to the fics you're planning to make in the future because I seriously need a ShinRan right now!
Anyways, despite it crushed my heart, it was beautiful. I love Shinichi and Sonoko's friendship here although it was a little inconsistent with the way they address themselves. That's okay. Not really a big issue.
The last part, with the jewelry, Shinichi saying he's giving her heart back made me want to cry so much! I mean how could you make this so heartbreaking! I want ShinRan right now! Please write more!
And I know that English was not your first language but your fic is incredible and rich with emotions. I also love your metaphors although constant wrong spelling and repetitive words made it a little confusing. Nonetheless, It was so good!
By the way, promise me that your next ShinRan will be a happy ending!