Reviews for Persistence
EdibleNonsense chapter 1 . 11/10/2019
Tien and Chiaotzu are two of my favorite (if not my favorite, period lol) Dragon Ball Z characters, and it's always nice to see fics about them and their interactions. So, this was a treat! I loved the description of how different they are, and in many ways how they're reflections of each other... it's very poetic. The inclusion of Launch (another favorite) made this even greater! I loved this
ThatOneHoodedDude chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
Awww this is so nice! :D
Tafferling chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
I only know those two through Satu's work, but I can see them in here clearly and I love it. This is a very reflective piece :) Well done!
commanderAIK chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
Heya! I too was inspired by SatuD2 to write my own Tien & Chiaotzu fic/oneshots, and while I have moved on to Undertale, it's works like these that remind me I always have to keep my foot in this, what I will call, sub-fandom.

I really liked this! This drabble conveyed such emotion in the form of nostalgia and longing for the past. It's something I've not seen examined nearly as much in any other works I've read. I'll keep an eye out for the other works you publish!
Satu-D-2 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
Ahhh, this is gorgeous, just gorgeous. Sad and bittersweet and just...just...AHH! Some of those phrases are just word porn, in their entirety, the celestial vault and how tiny they are in comparison, the persistence and Tien being as unmoving as stone that Chiaotzu's tears slowly wear down. Gawd, it's beautiful!

And then dedication and recommendation?! Brings me nearly to tears, thank you so much xoxo