love it so far... don't fuck it up!

nice!

I'm sorry did you just call helping a psychotic mass murderer taking over a country "a mistake" ?

It's Perenelle not Prenelle.
It's completely useless trivia but did you knew that the Flamel actually existed ?

Interesting choice, better than the cliche "Harry forgive his parents for years of complete neglect and acts like nothing happened". It's far more realistic to have him give up on them, after years of being disappointed by them ignoring him it makes sense.

Kinda hard to believe that neither Remus nor Sirius had said anything about Harry's neglect through the years, why would they keep quiet about it ? They have no reason to.

Really nice. I really like ie

Very pleased indeed, that his favourite 8-year old student called /Trelawney/ instead of himself, the 'mean old bat teacher'.

I think the death warnings were not for Harry but the horcrux of the dark lord voldyshorts to tell him that his soul would die

no matter how adorable or cute, snape would never let someone call him "Sevvie" lmfao. Also he's supposed to be a mature 11 yo but he's using names like that? cmon

I have absolutely no idea what you mean by a "360O" turn lmfao

Lol, ok, Minnie rules!

Remus*

Not directed to you, especially but at Rawlings, gobbledegook is a hodgepodge of words or letters simply thrown together which makes no sense separately.

Okay confused. You never had them go down to go through the traps get caught and in trouble? Did I miss a chapter or so? Love the story but it had no ending arc? Just a bit confused.