all im going to say you had it going good but at the end of this you ruined it for me buddy i thought your naruto was actually gonna be one who doesn't take shit from his teammates but nope just after defending himself hes gets confronted by kakashi than tells him he spoked to the kyuubi than tells him he'll be the heart of the team im sorry you went from actually changing naruto to basically going back to zero like if he doesn't want to talk to them how is that his fault? when its his teammates that are at fault who shun him so basically it his right to shun them back but nope what you do you make him fold and apologize cause he doesn't speak or interact with them soooo why? doesn't make sense to me

great wish there was more

Lol just no. You had a big plot hole from moment go. His weaker teacher kill a stronger traitor before he could say anything is just a joke.

Too much Cannon not enough imagination.

The grammar and structure of the text is terrible and confusing

Type your review here.a weakling naruto aweakling tsunade a weakling gaara a geniuos and op sasuke a useless fic useless naruto

Nice story nigga but u could make naruto a bit more rude to his team not chatting with them

Bullshit development. Sasuke going with naruto and Jiraya on the training trip is the most absurd idea ever. You made sasuke a jealous, power hungry, who’s even more fixated on revenge than canon just accept HELP from the guy he feels inferior to. BS

Lol what is utakata still doing in the leaf

Sigh why the rush for the narutema moments

Boring!

okay so this stops at the end of part one , i have to say this has many bad moments but also as many great moments so overall it was a good read . i would keep reading it if you ever got back to it , i will follow it for now and hope you come back to this soon.

great chapter , cant wait to read more . please come back to this soon since its been two years since last update . well on to the next chapter .

this was a great chapter . glad you didnt kill the 3rd hokage . and the moments between garra and naruto were good also with the kyuubi . i just wished we saw more of him and temari talking and more emotions .

hmm, its not possible for Ino to be this strong in just one month , and as fast as lee with weight ? its just not possible for a fangirl to change that much in a month .i think this was done poorly .other than that the chapter was good .