I have read most of your work and I’m a huge fan of it. But for some reason I’d never read this one before, something about the premise didn’t quite speak to me. Oh boy was I wrong! This is amazing! I should have read it sooner. Can’t wait to binge read the next two installments!

well that certainly was good I do hope there is more

Now I’m re reading again to the beginning of the seriesalways my favorite.

i am re reading it to refresh my memory and read rest of series

I think i have a tighter grip on what bothers me about your writing. You do such little introspection that it's hard to know what the characters are thinking and what's motivating them. They come across as very dry. There's no idea why Regina would be chasing after Emma so hard and no idea what Emma thinks about the situation. They just seem to be going through endless motions without saying anything that's relevant yet never shutting up at the same time.
Also you need to check them again. Jmo is pear shaped. That iconic pic of her standing and overlooking the town wearing her signature red jacket and jeans so tight that's apparently why she acts like a Neanderthal since it cuts off oxygen to her brain is horrifying. She has thick thighs, long limbs, wide hips and a fat ass. Her top half throws you off since she's so athletically built but Damn. She's huge. At least a size 7 If not 9. Being tall also makes you look thinner. L.p. On the other hand has short limbs, no hips, thin legs, and a tiny waist. She looks bigger because she's more compact and doesn't have the limbs to spread out. And the pushup bras she wears don't help since it pulls your eye focus on a center that's just busy. I'm trying to stay open minded here since i know you have a plan and i do want to see her and Emma have a baby but it's hard. like i said before i don't care about cheating so much as how what she's doing will affect her kids. I'm guessing/ hoping they already know the family is for show. Also her lack of give a fuck about them is too far out of her character. She hasn't called or shown any care about them at all. That's not the Regina everyone loves. Her huge heart is why everyone loves her and identifies with her so. So far I'm not supporting your decision on making them Robins either. Just speaking my peace.

ahhhhhh. i didn't review the last few chapters because i was hooked an just powered through it because i couldnt stop. i cant wait to read the sequel.

i hope you arent sick of me spamming reviews. but holy crap. i hope robin isn't going to be a problem.

this is so convoluted but so so good.

excellent barbara hershey reference.

omg the bedsharing trope. yes.

wow, gold is an ass. but loving regina and emma getting to spend more time together.

omg so cute. i hope we get cute snapchat stories.

okay that was the sweetest. emma better accept the invite.

just found this after reading your recent story. this is great and i'm so excited to see what you have in store for these two.

I don't like desperate Regina so I'm out of this one. I think it makes her look disgustingly pathetic.