Reviews for SHINOBI: The RPG - Act 1
Vallavarayan chapter 69 . 7/21
Seriously? You are equating being unable to kill a student he thought of as a son to stopping a ninja from missions for a week or two?
That was not nepotism. Nepotism would have been the third forgiving orochimaru and letting him back. The third just broke momentarily. That’s not the same.
And you are having the mc hate konoha for that? You think that and a hundred times worse does not happen in the real world? What with presidential pardons and paid judges and jurors?
Vallavarayan chapter 68 . 7/21
No one actually wants another war- which was why neither kumo nor iwa attacked konoha after the death of the third hokage.
Even Suna attqcking konoha would
Not have happened without orochimaru forcing things- could also be why the kazekage was killed- maybe he agreed with orochimaru and pulled out at the lst moment

All said and done, someone who lived with and made friends with all those people, still should not just wash his hands off a war- if the war starts for whatever reason- but try to save his friends and if possible, stop the war. That another war might erupt later on is no reason to not help his friends in the current war.
That’s like someone stopping from eating just because he thinks he will become hungry again later.
Vallavarayan chapter 67 . 7/21
Konoha never started any of the wars.
Even the part about Danzo starting the third was was not manga cannon. It was filler. And even if it was, most of konoha did not want war.
Even the Uchiha, even if Danzo ordered the massacre, the third had no knowledge of it. Even if he suspected, with no knowledge of the truth, he cannot arbitrarily kill Danzo.
Vallavarayan chapter 63 . 7/21
First, the fourth used it to only kill 50 ninjas in one shot once- which was enough to show the tsuchikage that it was better to stop the war.
And any seal he placed on a ninja could not be removed- so he could have flashed into the village of a ninja he tagged was brought back without knowledge of this fact.
Plus minato would not be someone to attack civilians.

And sorry about stating that sasori started the war- I was wrong about that.
Vallavarayan chapter 62 . 7/21
Minato became the hokage because of the war- he used the hiraishin to end the war even though he was against killing .
Sasori killed the second kazekage- and Suna became like the mad king in got- they started seing threats all around them- and started the war to make it look like they were not weak to ensure that no one else attacked them first. That’s quite well known by Gaara’s kidnapping. They show the Suna ninjas talking about it.
Two final cribs-
the third did very little to shape the mc- and what little he did was to keep him away from politics for as long as he could. And a 10 char and int mc should not take that too badly.
especially considering how much current schools , and entertainment does to sculpt the children. Every country brainwashed their children into loyalty through their system.(I am talking about in our world- countries like USA, Russia , the eu and even India)

And konoha probably did a lot less torture than present day countries. And konoha was probably the one village that did the least amount of physical torture- they specialised in mind reading and emotional torture by the Uchiha’s and ibiki (and probably boredom torture by the hyuga)
Vallavarayan chapter 16 . 7/20
... she actually does not stalk naruto. do you really think that hinata, the heiress of the clan, who always has a guard following her would be able to stalk naruto around? she's shown looking at him training in the academy a few times, and attempting to talk to naruto while he runs past her not listening to her some more.

her stalking naruto is purely fanfiction and not cannon. the whole naruto/hinata situation is because of kishimoto stringing things along to keep saukra and hinata fans interested and because he ramped up naruto's stupidity and denseness and hinata's shyness beyond a reasonable degree for comedy's sake.

becasue a attention starved naruto would not keep going after someone who keeps hitting him while someone else attempts to talk to him.
SpriteBlue chapter 39 . 7/18
Daisuke telling everyone how his bloodline works in its entirety is honestly making me uncomfortable. I dont like it when OP MCs try to hide that theyre OP, but telling everyone he befriends how they can cripple him and his obvious weaknesses?

I like how your game system is modeled from a lot of modern rpgs and less from classic mmos. I like how you handled the fact that he cant actually train to get stronger.
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 70 . 7/4
Loved reading this story
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 69 . 7/4
Awesome showdown
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 68 . 7/4
I like the philosophy
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 67 . 7/4
Insightful chapter
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 66 . 7/4
Ayame is the best
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 65 . 7/4
Nice new gun
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 64 . 7/3
Can't wait for the vacation to end
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 63 . 7/3
Don't see the third winning this fight
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