The entire story was so well done. Bravo!

I know one review wont make a difference but this is a GREAT story. I loved how you tackled all of their problems and insecurities in the show but in a different way! Also, beyond hyde and jackie, it was all about social hierachy and other important topics. I just think you made Kelso a little too insensitive, dumb and a jerk, so much so that i really started to despise him, but it works with your story! I especially adored eric and jackies friendship and its a pretty sexual story but you kept me captivated. Thank you for giving me entertainment this week!

Great story! Loved the slow burning romance and build up. The dialogue is spot on throughout as well and it was interesting reading about all the school politicking going on. I'd call their behavior juvenile and short sighted in spots (thus wanting to slap both Jackie and Hyde at points) but to be honest a lot of people (high school and sadly as adults even) are actually that obsessed with gossip and thinking of their social networks as chess pieces (excellent job on maintaining the chess game theme throughout this) so I think you're one of the few fanfiction writers on here who actually writes realistic teenagers. Seriously A job there. So many writers here write teenagers through their own (the writer's) adult lens/perspective and they miss the realism mark for teenage irrational behavior. You captured that perfectly so seriously A job there I was very impressed (even when the characters irritated me lol so kudos on evoking emotion and character investment our of me). I also loved the way you developed Marks character. Great job there! The only constructive thing I have is the school nurse's medical knowledge was non existent. The concussion protocol was way off (I'm in the medical field so notice that stuff a bit more than the average reader) but the kids messing it up made sense, just the nurse mucking it up was the only area that could be clarified. Other than that great job on this binged it in one day.

Hyde needs slapped. Officially. The poor dense boy.

My god Ive had a 70s show fanfiction binge this week and thus far it's all been your stories. Lol This is great! Donna and Erics reaction and made up combo names for Jackie and Hyde are hilarious!

This is one of the best Jackie/Hyde stories I've ever read. So happy I stumbled upon it! I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

This was the most beautiful story I think I’ve ever read! I loved it so much! 10 out of 10

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I love this sooooooo much. I really avoided all my responsibilities to sit and read through this whoops.

What a lovely wrap-up! I really enjoyed this first to last - the careful growth of their relationship, the way it tied into the life of the smaller group and the school as a whole, and the way each of them affected the other for the better in the long run. Well done!

That 70's Show/Dangerous Liaisons intersting take.

Loved the cheer-off! And the way Valerie's bravado crumbled and turned into nothing but empty accusations felt very consistent with her character and that type in general.

Loved it! But at the end when hyde mentions his sat scores I was thinking I would love to read a fanfic of Jackie and hyde in college!

I really like the sense of the plot threads all coming together here, beginning to be tied off. The pacing of this story has been excellent all the way through, and it's paying off beautifully here at the end.

It's all out in the open now! So nice to see them come together as a couple in the face of the public. Can't wait to see how the cheer-off goes.