Reviews for For A Short Time
WearyCurmudgeon chapter 1 . 12/26/2019
So, near future?
*eyes the coming new decade*

Even if the pairing of this tale has been a bit soured for me by a recent cheating/cuckolding story with a setup for NTR, disguised as an Arkos drama.

I do think it would be nice if this one was finished.

And what exactly Pyrrha's issue with Jaune is, that has them "seeing other people", as I'm guessing that this is what the agreement is about.

Well, that or an euphemism for breaking up. Can't really tell from the context. Not enough clues to be able to figure it out

Some things point to column A, others to column B, if you will.

Anyway, size or stamina issue?

With both cases being he has too much, rather than too little? Based on what little she's said thus far.

If it's an endurance issue.
Well.. Maybe the Arkos relationship can be fixed by turning it into a triad. Or is that objectionable to her pride? (As Jaune's Semblance is quite capable of rejuvenating/healing his partner as well, not just himself. So not fully sure that this could be an issue.)

Otherwise... Yeah. No idea then. As that would seem more like mostly a pride issue on Pyrrha's side then, as I don't think that Jaune would care about hillting if it meant hurting his partner.

Girth... Well, a baby comes out from that area, so a woman can be stretched. Might not be initially comfortable, but doesn't seem like an insurmountable problem through proper foreplay.

So yeah, stumped.

*shrugs*

Oh and sorry if this discusses Arkos more than it does the Yang/Pyrrha ship. But you left it rather a big mystery as to why this chapter is even happening in the first place, as based on Pyrrha's statements the relationship was healthy/good.

And you have even Yang puzzled about it all.

*shrugs*

Again, sorry.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
fabulous tales of Arkos
blaiseingfire chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
Jaune was too big for Pyrrha to handle XD