PLEASE MAKE MORE PLEASE

This chapter is great! I hope you update this story in the future!

Nooo the story ended too quickly
Well, I have to say
This story has been great from the start tbh
How bonfires work, the feelings when you respawn
The friendships and relationships with the firelink inhabitants are pretty cool
The idea of a new Astora and making friends is aaaa
Its so nice and funny
The banters, and the dynamics
I like it
Too bad we didn’t get to see Grierat Of the Undead settlement , the girl from Carim, and Obneck of Vienhim or whatever his name is
The combat is also pretty nice, i am interested if we will see phantoms and weapon arts
I do like the ending with prince lothric
Though one of my criticisms is well..
How did the Firekeeper and the Ashen One leave the first Kiln?
And the Firekeeper is supposed to use ancient english the whole time which is understandably hard to do
And lastly, it is not a criticism per say but
Do they really have to have children?(Selene and Alexandro)

I'm loving this, hope for more.

Wow, love your take on the age of man, can't wait for more

Really enjoyable and lovely, a treat to read.

Great chapter! I love how light hearted this one was, it was really enjoyable.

Come on man. You can't just drop me off a cliff like this and expect me to hang around here, can you?

I very much enjoyed reading this. The Firekeeper always deserves more love. Also I really like that you started from Lothric’s fight instead of telling the story from the very beginning. It worked splendidly and I cannot wait to see where you take this tale.

Another great chapter, can't wait to see more!

Damn that was a little unfair from varro , but I guess I can understand him , he's scared for the people of new astora and his familly .
And Damn that panick attack , thought alexandro was going hollow for a minute .
But overall great chapter ! keep going mate .

By the sun. The mention of Anri tugged my heart strings. I don't need to be reminded of her story damn it ;-; I should've listened to Ludlet when he told me not to pursue her. But still AH.. kudos to you good author.

Great chapter! It's great to see the residents from Firelink reunite with the Alexandro and Selene. Though I am curious regarding the whereabouts of Irina, Orbeck, Yuria, and especially patches. I do have a few guesses. It might be a bit too many characters to include at one time, Orbeck is probably dead in Lothric castle, maybe Irina left with Eygon to go wherever, Yuria returned to Londor or perhaps was killed, and Patches left Firelink to be the trickster he is to prey upon other unfortunate souls.

This novel have no slight indication of what could happen. I love the vibe of mystery as I had for Dark Souls. Ah I love it! If the event occurs that somehow they all have to reveal their title, I'm ripped and excited! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ah! The feels! The same mystery which makes Dark Souls, Dark Souls. The essence of mystery and unknown just really sets out in this story of yours Author. I can't help but believe that this could potentially be the genuine ending aftermath when you chose the ending to let the fire die out.

Welp, time for the fanboy to start a fanclub. Go Author! Lol.