are you going to finish this story

I love this story, however, when are you going to update again?

I just happened upon this story and read what you have so far, I think its great! Please update it soon.

I can wait for more

Please finish this story, it’s amazing

Please update this soon

Please update this story

Please let David have second thoughts of marrying Katherine and let David tell Mary Margaret aka Snow White he still loves her and he doesn’t want to marry the other one please . Plus let Mary Margaret say she loves David aka charming and that she is sorry for arguing and being mean to him so that they can be back together please.

I love this story. Will you be updating soon?

One of my new favorite stories. My heart is so broken for MM. It's bad enough she knows he is proposing, but then having to watch it. Sure she really needed some Emma cuddles. You hae me hooked. Can't wait for more.

That was a hard chapter to read as we have never seen David in love with anyone but Snow before. I mean, he only thought he had memories of loving Kathryn. We never had to see it. Poor Snow. I just want to hug her. You write them both so well that I take turns being frustrated with them both and wanting to hug them.

I love drama as long as it has a happy ending so I’m enjoying all this Snowing drama if it meant they’ll be together later. Little Emma is so adorable and I think the dynamic of the family is very realistic for what divorced parents can be so I love the story. Keep it this amazing!

Aww, you're welcome love 3

Don't worry about the Snow haters. Some people just have a real bee in their bonnet about her *cough* and need a life *cough*.

Great chapter, though this is an issue I had with the show and other shows. But it always bothered me when the couple broke up the guy moves on to the point of marriage. Yet that wasn’t my biggest issue my problem was that the girl never does and is always left to either be jealous or pine after the guy. Also the one-night stand is so common. I feel like in these stories it should be equal but they never are the guy always gets to move on while the girl has to always be the “bad” one and the reason. And I always question if they truly loved each other why would the guy leave and marry someone else? I guess I wish we could see more of how David feels, maybe a hint of him still in love with MM if not then what’s the point? I wish we could see MM date more too if David moves on why not her? But I know where you’re goingI really like it so I hope you don’t think this is hate. I just want to still get the impression there is some undeniable love between them.

Beautiful start.