This story was amazing and exciting to read from the beginning to the end. Thank you for writing it and I think that adding your own personal experiences gives it a more realistic feel which makes it all the better.

I honestly thought that the plot would be quite light and Humorous but that sure took a dark turn. But it tied everything together well. However, since it also came from your own personal experience, my sincere condolences...

I CANNOT stop laughing, this is just awesome. Talk about a rough night.

Sooooo... I'm kinda glad that I fell behind on reading this when I did instead of keeping up with each chapter as they posted. I got so distracted with other fics, and when I'd gone to read one of the chapters for this, I was like "eh, not in the mood for this particular story right at this moment" and decided to come back later and later ended up being now and finding out it's finished.

BUT, with the tonal shift there and the sudden serious turn of events... I think I'd have felt even worse if I'd had to read each chapter as it came instead of all at once. It doesn't help that while I'm really really REALLY happy that Viktor lived and was cured... the whole cancer thing just really hit hard as my family just lost our grandmother/mother (my grandma) to cancer in January after a year long battle that we KNEW we weren't going to win from the beginning. Her treatments were only to try and prolong her life and make her as comfortable as possible before it wasn't possible anymore. So yea, ouch. But, knowing me and my own "glass heart", even if I didn't have such personal experience with cancer in the family, I'd probably still have ended up bawling over those chapters because sad stories get me that way. So again, glad to have read it all at once, kinda like ripping off a bandaid, I got all the tears out in one go and could get to the happier ending you wrote. And the rather sad but adorable epilogue for poor Yuri who lost his first crush/love to his "big brother/rival" person.

Anywho, besides the drama there, the rest was pretty funny, I was actually standing around in the Men's department of a JCPenny's waiting for my brother to find some socks and underwear when I read the chapter where Mila messed with poor, sweet, innocent Guang-hong's head about the bra... And just the general insanity of when the Russian team basically decided to move to Hasetsu for the rest of the season at least. lol

No pressure but can i request a one-shot of everyone's reaction when Viktor collapsed while on ice (chapter 32)? And when the whole world found about Yuurika's real gender? I'm just really curious on how you would write it and good luck with the epilogue can't wait until it comes out!

This makes me so happy.

I just needed to leave some space for that statement. I liked the 4 chapters today and am a little curious about the song so I'll probably go check it out later. I am absolutely ecstatic that Viktor is fine and him and Yuuri are married. I was kinda hoping to see their wedding or actual proposal or crazy Yuuri creating the perfect wedding (I think it was this fic that had Yuuri plan her wedding when she was younger). Anyways, I'm always looking forward to the rest and I laugh at oblivious Viktor. I'm literally as blind as Yuuri in terms of not realizing he had cancer until ch 30. Can't wait for more :)

Oh my god. I was literally crying. I thought this was going to be happy with a lighthearted tone. I was wrong! Well, I'm sad I hope there is a happy ending although I will finish it either way. I would just prefer to not be crying my eyes out. Looking forward to the rest :') T-T

Yuuri is so...stupid... DX

I'm not going to lie, I was a little sad when I was reading about Viktor's frustrated and upset faces. I mean it went from lighthearted banter to serious sh!t's hitting the fan within a number I do like how Yuuri now has a B.S and has a possible future ahead of her besides the ice. Although I do understand why Viktor was so upset when Yuuri didn't really consider her pro figure skating career as an actual career (figure skaters, I think, have the shortest active time and have the earliest age of retirement).

I AM very eager to hear about the real reason Viktor appeared at Hasetsu since their apparent first meeting didn't go too well. With all this drama I am very excited for what will happen next and if their supposed "kiss" will actually happen on national television. When she asks him if he knows what he wants to do after figure skating... I felt so much for Viktor in that moment. No one wants to think about the end (except for Yuuri I guess). Anyways, looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Poor Yurio, when he feels like an abandon kitten. I think he need a better way of dealing with his feelings other than screaming and violence. Well I hope Viktor or Yuuri gets actual engagement rings (they can laugh about the moon rings later) so Pichit can give his best man speech. I can't wait for what happens next and I'll be hoping for more development or breaking down next chapter... or you know just straight humor ;)

I thought this chapter was pretty funny, made me laugh quiet a lot. I also enjoyed that almost engagement but I was so sad with Yuuri's depression. Although good job at capturing her "it's all my fault I don't know why Viktor even bothers with me" thoughts.

On another note I like JJ and Isabella as a couple since she is always wholeheartedly supporting him in everything. I also like the way it seems Viktor slowly but surely fell in love with Yuuri and not love at first dance in the anime, it just seems a lot more relationship happened off screen than on screen in this fanfic. I thought this chapter ad a whole really started to bring the story together especially with Yuuri's angry drunkenness, that will prove to be a very interesting relationship. I also like how the whole girlfriend thing happened at the banquet at an attempt at comforting by Viktor. I'm really excited for what comes next and on a side thought I think a pregnant Yuuri would be a very emotional Yuuri. Looking forward to more :)

Otabek knowing that Yuuri was a girl and thinking it was a Japanese tradition was really funny.

I was a little confused about the mujer thing until Yuuri came back from the bathroom. I don't really have much to say though I imagine Yuuri or someone else coming up with the lie that she didn't understand Spanish at all and just assumed it was a coed bathroom.

This is just my opinion but I'm not too big of Yurio. I really don't know why but I struggle to like him. Whatever, I'm looking forward to more (maybe someone like Pichit will shout something like Yuuri's thinking about becoming a women) can't wait for more

After reading this i couldn't help but laugh. I know from experience (and an unhealthy obsession with mood rings) that the lowest temp color I think is blue, cuz I stuck them in the freezer. At least they found the building they were looking for :). I still hope Pichit will point out their rings and then the next time they look down it's like red or something because of how embarrassed Yuuri is. I also noticed that in this fix Yuuri isn't as queasy or as easily embarrassed compares to her canon counterpart.

I'm really enjoying the story and I hope no one cries (but at the same time do cuz I want ploy development) and I am eagerly waiting for the next part. I can't wait for more! :)

Oh no no no author I didnt mean to point out any mistakes from the last sentence of chapter 20! I was just surprised to read that sentece! It's kind of stupid of me but, I didn't expect that yuri would like yuurika.

I don't know how I feel about this chapter. I like how fast Sara's women intuition worked (How do I English properly?). I don't have too much feed back to offer besides this and this was a kind of large time skip so I'm assuming everything not mentioned was the same ish like canon. I look forward to more! :)