Fantastic story! I loved every second of it! Everyone is in character and the plot is logical and exciting! I'm so amazed at your talent! Very excited for the next chapter!

Hughes better be alive...

Great update as always. I'm finally coming down from my episodes of mini heart attacks each time you update and put my favorite peeps through the ringer. Now I can only wait and see what will happen to them. And what sensible story Mustang can pull out of his ass. I am getting a bit sadden over the fact that this story is coming to a close...

Ooof, we really needed this chapter after the stress of the last couple! I knew Ed was going to pull through somehow, but the way he DID just makes me super curious now about Truth's motives behind all of this. When someone like that gets this accommodating, then you know you've REALLY got to worry XD

My favorite thing in this chapter was the very end. Since most of the focus in the story so far has been on Ed and Mustang (understandably so), it's so wonderful to get a good scene with just the two brothers again. So sweet :3

The way you write Ed and Al’s interactions always feels like they’re straight out of the show, and I have a VERY nitpicky standard for staying in-character. You have these characters on lock, and it’s really impressive! I do have to wonder how the hell they’re going to keep Mustang and the gang out of prison, barring a cross-universe prison break orchestrating by the brilliant Dr. Silas and Regina

Oh thank GOODNESS Hughes is alive! That scared me oh my gosh...

How DARE YOU KILL THEM? DAMN IT, I was looking forward to Hughes being ALIVE for once... Insert sobs... Seriously though, I love the story and I am... apprehensive to say the least about what’s coming up, because YIKES that was a scary ending

OHOHO! Mustang can see and hear Ed! Again, was NOT expecting that, although this time is more of a great twist and less of me lacking braincells. Time to watch a probably horribly botched car robbery! :D

Ohoho! Ghost possession! I don’t know how on earth that possibility didn’t cross my mind. This is going to get even MORE interesting, isn’t it? Loving it so far!

Wow wow wow wow ok ok this is fine. So close to the end! I’m so excited but also kinda sad because I’ve LOVED reading this story. Finally some feel good brother moments! No more angst, right Rain? Right? It’s happy ending time! I hope. I love me some good hospital scenes, and this one hit the nail on the head. Ed not being able to talk yet still communicating with Al almost perfectly just...I loved it. Pretty sure I was grinning through that entire last section. I’m so excited to read the conclusion to this awesome story! Stay safe and keep up the great work!

I hear the "I've done so much research I'm probably on a couple watchlists" thing, let me tell you. It's worse when you do research fof a story and ads for the stuff you were researching haunt you for weeks afterwards though. That aside, glad Ed's properly alive now, and I love the portrayal of Truth in this story! Also, the humour! Just the right amount and in perfect places, and a forever interesting take on a dead Ed fic, I don't think I've seen any other ghost!Ed fics and that is a CRIME!

Also also, with Ed being alive and in his own body again will you be wrapping this story up or is there still more lovely misery you've cooked up to put everyone's sons through?

-Artisiano

This chapter was awesome!
I can't wait to read the next chapter and see where this story goes ;)

Poor Alphonse has really had it rough, but I'm glad his hope has finally been rewarded! Everyone's alive, even if just barely, and he's got his big brother there again. ;o;

Poor Al, when he gets his body he will probably already have gray hairs because of his stupid brother. I'm a little confused by the 'under arrest' bit. Do they...do they think Roy did this? I'm a little worried on how they are gonna explain Ed's magic appearance.

Also, WHY would ED need a CUFF, we know he TOTALLY WOULDN'T do ANYTHING wrong! He is COMPLETELY innocent! (Please note the dripping sarcasm)

I'm curious how different thing will go from canon do to Ed's little ghostly jaunt. Especially now he is done.

Lovely to see an update, and as always excited for more!

gah i loved this so much! god the terror when he popped in and was bleeding profusely from his neck was palpable! damn i loved this so much! and thank you so much for the update!

Miss rainflame as always you have done a wonderful job!
I couldnt think of how much time and effort you put into these chapters/stories and we all appreciate that!
You will remain my favorite author of all time!
(You rock my socks too lol!)
Take care rain, I'll be awaiting the next chapter of whatever story you update first!
God bless you!