This was absolutely AMAZING! I really enjoyed this!

loved this!
would love to read more!

So I am ploughing on through with review catch up. These were delicious. I love these what if things. I have to admit i really love this last one. I like them dancing. And I like that this got amazingly heated. Marvellous work!

Finished reading them all now... just have to say: wonderful! I love the tension of the 'I love you but I can't say anything and it's driving me mad' time period for these two, so these were great! Fun to read and well done!

This is so cute! And that's my favorite Disney movie, so I'm all in on this one! :-) I adore her laughter, so I'm with Patrick on that one. And I really like the end of this one, there's just such a playful banter and then that line about her heart beating in time with his. Nice!

I think it’s the fourth or fifth time I read this chapter. I simply love it so much ️️

THIS WAS EVERYTHING! *ugly sobs* *heart bursts*
Goodness me, what a WONDERFUL bang to end with indeed! First, the way Tim wanted to ask Sr. Bernadette for help, how she borrowed Nurse Miller's heels and taking over her wimple! And then for Patrick to reveal himself before them, leading to the pair dancing and just being an amazing duo! Poor Sr. Bernadette, having not practiced in years, but her slip leading to their kiss! It was absolutely brilliant and kettles win for sure! My heart breaks for her though, all her self doubt and thinking her actions are a betrayal of her religious life! Isn't denying her heart self-punishment though!? Oh my wee heart and your exploration into it was brilliant (can't say that enough). I'm so glad you continued to add these extra five chapters (we don't deserve it haha), thank you for this wonderful snippets of their first kisses (and potential ones)!

*squeals* *dies a little* This was precious and adorable! My hat off to you again! Poor Sr
Bernadette, never the one to complain or ask for help or anything really! Her fall could have been alot worse and lucky that Knight Patrick was there! I love the exploration of his thoughts and his own internal battle. Wanting to comfort her physically and mentally, yet he has no right to do so (but it's love and love knows no bounds). Poor him, but we all know they find each other and spontaneous him always helps in that regard!

My heart (such an emotional roller coaster)! This was great and the exploration into her internal battle felt so realistic and raw. It gives her great pain, the state she's in for wanting to keep her current occupation as a religious sister, but the heart feels the pull of the woman inside her. It's painful to experience and even more so to read about- my heart broke when she thought her actions were "sordid" (girl, I also experienced flashback moments to another one of your characters- killing me)! But to write on her struggle was brilliant and how at every turn, love is beckoning her forth! Poor Patrick, just sleeping there and tempting Sr. Bernadette forward, but it's a beautiful thing. The journey is the bit that bumping and great observation on how she must give up everything for him, while for Patrick, he's more of a receiver!

Potential kisses for the win too! Goodness me, I felt her turmoil and sense of doom as I read this (for I too have experienced panic attacks and this was extremely realistic)! My heart weeps for them both during this exchange and the inability to forgo one's barriers. Yet the barriers have been a form of comfort for both; religious vows and structure of medical professionalism. My word, this was great and left much to be desired (in the form of words and comfort to be exchanged- definitely glad you decided to dedicate another story to this)!

*dead* This was great and aren't you a bit of a cheat (kidding, but aren't you though)! Such intimacy was expressed and yet, with hardly any physical contact, wonderful and tortuous! I loved this exchange and the element of cigarettes explored as well. I can't believe Patrick basically told her he dreamt about her- what a silly man (I literally laughed aloud)! I bet his dream was all about ways he could get Sr. Bernadette in giving back his cigarette case (*eyebrow wiggle to the heavens*)!

My wee heart! So glad you continued your take from Chapter 6! There was so much love and admiration laid out in this chapter that I feel my heart bursting as well! It's very difficult at times to express one's feelings and you did a marvelous (realistic) job at it! The way Patrick is able to articulate his feelings and thoughts to the women he loves is everything! Along with Shelagh reciprocating such strong emotions and understanding!

Oh WOW! What a way to end this amazing series of first kisses (and caresses *eyebrow wiggle wiggle*)! This was everything and I just love the exploration of feelings; present and past! Along with revelations made when it came to Patrick's past with Marianne and Sr. Bernadette's own past and emotions when it comes to the Turner family. I love how you answered the prompts, but how you twisted each story! I can't tell you enough how much I love your stories and again, the element of nature played throughout! Along with Sr. Bernadette's artistic ability, you definitely need to write a take on how Patrick finds the crumpled drawing (my heart)! And there's more!

WOW! THERE ARE NO WORDS! This was absolutely WONDERFUL! This has to be one of my FAVS as well! First, the whole ordeal they went through, your descriptions, and what followed once Shelagh saved Patrick! My word, let the steam rise! Also the element of the cottage (secluded houses definitely leads to tumblings in the forest, ;) don't though)! This was tastefully well done and just magical! Along with them discussing their worries and not wanting to leave with so much having changed. Their surroundings will be the same, but they never will, forever changed by their encounter and love! I also adore the element of them dressing each other and when the forest waved them goodbye ! And peeks of Patrick and Shelagh remained and only the other could detect their presence!

LOVE your take on how Sr. Bernadette and Dr. Turner ended up locked in the Parish basement (there honestly has to be one, especially with all their supplies in need of storage)! Poor Patrick, letting his emotions get the best of him, but then they wouldn't have ended up together. Locked in solitude together allowed for the opportunity to express their True emotions! Your portrayal of their frustrations and happiness was on point! I especially love too how stubborn Sr. Bernadette was, but conceded in being next to Patrick (also her sass, yes). Then what followed was just bliss! My wee heart!