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  H chapter 23 . 8/27 Redo fics are generally fun and this was no different. That potion sounds particularly nasty and I hope Arthur gets saved and that Hermione also gets some protection against it. Can’t hurt to be too careful knowing what can and did happen. Thanks for writing. |
| Someone chapter 23 . 8/17 Greta story there. Hope you start a sequel soon. Cheers! |
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/29 UPDATE! |
| Critical reader chapter 23 . 7/28 In the light of your own comments about the story, I believe you could well continue it, either during or after you iron out the flaws in the first part. If you deviate from canon, well, it's your fanfiction where you can build your own world. As it is, your story is already better than average. Perhaps you should complete the following parts first before posting them, this avoids disappointment among the readers should you run out of steam while writing. |
 The Ghostly Minion chapter 5 . 7/29 At least the first classes went well. Harry’s revelations make sense, though I’m slightly regretful for Hermione’s discomfort. Potions went about as one expected. No surprise Ron is a shit from the start. I hope they have no mercy on him, Ginny or Molly. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 4 . 7/29 Was Harry glamoured so Ron didn’t recognize him? Considering how clueless he is, maybe not! I found your take on Draco fascinating. Could he turn out to be an ally, ignoring hours rivalries? The ‘new H&H should makes friends from all houses — especially Susan Bones, as they want Sirius cleared. TGM |
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 7/29 Wow, I love your setup. This soul master potion is about the worst thing I’ve every heard about. Once they are off it I hope know they can refund that friendship, ditch the Weasleys and make their live what is should be. TGM |
| Sheelahdog chapter 23 . 7/26 I kinda thought the whole point was how gross it was. |
| Sheelahdog chapter 22 . 7/26 Aww that was so sweet! Glad you are updating! Love this story! |
| starlite22 chapter 22 . 7/25 Has hopped Harry would want to cost Hermione or invite her and her parents among for at least part of it |
| ak chapter 22 . 7/17 bonne fic! |
| Fallow57 chapter 22 . 7/11 xxXxx KUDOS xxXxx : ) |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/11 The first flying lesson was before the halloween, but ok. |
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/11 Chapter 11 it was only Harry and Ron in the dorm bcoz everyone went home for christmas, then chapter 12 he was sitting by Neville, Dean and Seamus. Wut? |
| Cassandra30 chapter 22 . 7/12 Good story! Get Arthur saved! |
