Reviews for The Journey Has Begun
Danny chapter 5 . 4/17/2018
Hey dudette not to put pressure on you but, will you keep writing this story? 'Cuz to be honest its a beautiful story for being stoped and I'm sure I'm not the only one who thinks you must continue the story but I would be so happy, if you did!
OceanCat22 chapter 5 . 9/22/2017
I love it! Please post another chapter really soon; I can't wait!
RedAce16 chapter 5 . 8/26/2017
Amazing job! I'm loving it so far! Really well done, I feel bad now. Tui's dead, great... And Maui having a wife... Talk about ouch. I would like to see them all recover and move on(obviously), but since we all know that Moana and Maui like/love each other will they kinda pine after each other? Like will the elders try to force Moana into marrying? So Maui would be pining after Moana and her to him? Idk random thoughts. ANYWAYS great job! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Danny chapter 5 . 8/25/2017
Poor Tui, it's a shame he had to leave and now Moana is suffering so much for it and so do Maui and Sina. And as for Maui I could see Tui's death hurt him so much and the fact that he realized he's falling in love with Moana uy, I wouldn't blame him to be scared about it 'cuz he fell in love once and he lost it and the idea of loosing Moana too he could handle it but now it's too late, he's in love, now let's how things work for them.
Serena-chan1 chapter 4 . 7/21/2017
This is an incredibly beautiful story. I look forward to more!
5dreamcatcher chapter 4 . 6/24/2017
Um. This is amazing. CANNOT wait for more.
kunoichi418 chapter 4 . 6/13/2017
great chapter! It sounds like Tui's time is limited though...I'm also loving how their relationship is developing slowly yet very nicely. I thought it was very clever and fitting to use the song from Pocahontas lol! and the name Opetaia. Great work, beautiful descriptions and capturing their emotions. Keep it up!
Danny chapter 3 . 5/31/2017
I loved this story and the way Moana and Maui's relationship starts blooming slowly but beautifully at the same time, and the fact that Maui already has a place where he calls home he finally got what he'd always wanted and Moana could make her dream come true, I can't wait for more.
Natalie chapter 2 . 5/4/2017
I love this story, Im so happy that Maui has a place to call home and how moana and his relationship is blooming slowly XD, I also have to compliment you on your chapter size, they really are amazing and I am loving enjoying every moment of reading it, I look forward to your next big chapter, XD
EmberJ.Fell chapter 1 . 4/21/2017
This story is everything I was hoping to find in a Moana fanfiction. Keep up the great writing, can't wait for the next chapter.
OH MY LORD PANDAS chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
Absolutely amazing. I would like to see More to this story. I'm loving it.
kunoichi418 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
I'm also loving how the relationship is building between Maui and Moana, I always thought they should have a romance story after all they went through together! Your descriptions are excellent, and keeping in character with both of them...keep it up, can't wait to read more!
kunoichi418 chapter 1 . 4/5/2017
This is so awesome! I love the story so far, and the part where Maui first meets Chief Tui! That had me laughing!
MihaDani chapter 1 . 4/2/2017
So far, so good! I loved that chapter! Is well wrote and I loved every dialogue and situation!
Can't wait to read next one, please keep up the good work!