This fanfic is better than a lot of published fictions sitting in bookstores right now.

Your imagination is wonderful. The story weaves in a few different directions to cover the main characters, all of whom are likeable. The build up of the storylines has been done really well and the battles scenes are exciting.

I can't admire enough how brave Onar is! He suspected he will not return but still he followed Thranduil to help him.

Really enjoyed reading this chapter . Kept !me up past my bedtime. But didn't want to be finished with this world!

Wonderful development of Thranduil. He really changed from angry youth now we can see adult person try to control his emotions and do what is necessary to reach his aim.

Another breathtaking scene. The emotions are written so well. I am so happy Thranduil managed to get rid of part of his anger. It had be humiliating for him but he loves his sister's son even if he doesn't know about it. I think that he did it both for Elrond and for himself when he agreed to his anger to let it go.

I love Astalder and definitely don't like Lammaeg. Astalder is really intelligent to suspect young cadet. I felt really sorry when he died.

The dragon's blood increased strength but still I wonder if part of its soul reached Thranduil. He was scared of being tainted but was it real or free will? Can't wait to see if he managed to free his light.

It was wonderful of Melian that she tried to prepare Thranduil the best as she could for the future. Perfectly written scene with dragon.

The meeting with dragon always holds my breath away!

Again I am happy I read this chapter after you posted the end of this scene. The anticipation of next move would be overwhelming.

Love the glimpse Elrond had about Thranduil as a king in the future!

Perfect!

Love relationship between Elrond and Thranduil.

Love your idea how Thranduil found Galion.